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06/12/2003 10:29:29 AM |
*Critique Club*
The overall redness of this is a little strange and I don't think I find it very attractive. I have to wonder where it's coming from. It doesn't seem like it would be just red reflection off the car, cause the color is on top, and the red 'glow' is under the car.
The fact that the end of the pipes seem to be soft in focus, kind of bothers me as well. I'd like that part to be the sharpest. The overall focus looks ok, but the end of the pipes just seems soft.
Havig just put dual flowmasters on our car, I can definately see how this relates to sound. I wish this were an older vette though, might have been even 'louder'.
The angle and framing/cropping is just fine to have gotten the exhaust in the shot. I think maybe I would have cropped the white line around the top though. Looks like reflection, but I think that it's a distraction. If you cover it up, see how it brings your eyes right down to the belly of the car?
~Heather~ |
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06/04/2003 05:05:57 PM |
Your border appears to be uneven. Great image, certainly fits the challenge! |
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06/03/2003 10:29:45 PM |
I do not care for the overall orangey tone of the shot, though I don't know how avoidable that might have been depending on lighting. The actual concept is good one... hey, wait. Is that a Hot Wheels? |
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06/02/2003 02:03:45 PM |
I don't like the red tone overall to this, but I love the concept. I wish there was smoke or something coming out to show action. |
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06/02/2003 08:27:38 AM |
Nice Vette :o) Clever idea. |
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06/02/2003 03:00:10 AM |
Could have done with some smoke. |
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06/01/2003 09:15:49 PM |
If I'm not mistaking, this is the exhast system of the car. Wouldn't the vroom sound would come from the engine? Also, something about the colors in this picture just doesn't seem right. I do like the refections of the pipes. It is well focused and does make a somewhat abstract-y photo.
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