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10/01/2006 11:44:54 AM |
Such a natural, feel good shot.
So much warmth and brings a smile to my face. |
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08/13/2006 10:56:07 PM |
This is awesome Ursula...I love the detail and the choice to go b and w...I cannot believe I haven't seen this shot before...and what a score! |
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06/30/2006 09:26:58 AM |
Wow... what a great shot! Love the feeling of a 'story' happening. Makes me wonder what they are whispering and giggling about. |
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09/06/2005 08:33:11 AM |
what a perfect pic-timeless and full of emotion |
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09/06/2005 07:59:06 AM |
What a wonderful portrait. I love how there is a sparkle in the girls eye as she stiffles a giggle. Happy, carefree, and mischievious at the same time. |
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08/14/2005 09:58:24 PM |
I just discovered this photo and was quite pleased to do so. I am enchanted by this piece of work. |
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04/28/2005 01:11:00 AM |
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04/25/2005 08:50:27 AM |
i LOVE the emotion of this photo and the moment that it captures :-) I wish I had a picture like this with my loved one :-) |
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07/03/2004 12:42:50 PM |
well done - perfect candid
although i'd prefer straight BW over the toning.
worthy of wall hanging no doubt.
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01/17/2004 03:33:52 PM |
This is a GREAT PICTURE! It should have won 1st Place!!! |
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07/07/2003 05:47:11 PM |
ursula,
I come back to this picture again and again. For all the things david mentioned, and all the comments below..there is so much love and life in this shot..the emotion is truly moving. I truly think it is one of the most emotive shots on the site, and I'm so delighted you shared it with us. :) |
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07/03/2003 10:11:13 AM |
Hi Ursula, I'm just studying this photo again, and I marvel at the skilled use of lighting here. I'm just noting where the darkest shadows are and where the light rests. The composition and cropping are outstanding, too. This is just superb! I hope you don't mind if I copy this technique in the near future! |
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06/11/2003 02:39:15 PM |
Congrats on a beautiful shot. The emotion is quite strong. My only negative comment, which no one mentioned, is that you have oversharpened this. I tried adding smart blur and despeckle and it helps. You should also tone down the contrast a touch and boost the brightness a little, too take the focus away from her hand. I know you won a ribbon and might ask why I am giving negative comments, but I think these slight changes would make it "perfect". |
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06/10/2003 06:28:55 AM |
Ursula, I keep coming back to this shot. I just can't resist it! It has got to be my current favorite photo on DPC right now! It is so intimate and so full of joy--I just love it!
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06/09/2003 11:57:02 AM |
Wow! Ursula, this is an awesome photograph. I love the genuine look on the face of the little one. I almost can hear them! Congratulations on the ribbon!
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06/09/2003 09:18:33 AM |
this makes me laugh looking at this ... it is so full of life .. love it ... |
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06/09/2003 09:18:03 AM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
What can I say??? I can not offer anything that would make this shot better, or identify anything that you did wrong, so I guess I will just identify some of the elements that I like, and why I think they work.
The little girl's expression is so genuine; it is almost impossible not to smile while looking at her. It does not look staged at all, or posed, so good work on the naturalness of the shot. Also, your crop is particularly effective, I think, because it focuses the attention on the little girl's eyes. By eliminating the "outside" of their heads, it gives a more intimate feeling.
The coloring you have chosen really adds to the emotion of the shot and helps to control skin tones, which can look red or blotchy in color if the lighting is not exaclty right. Great focus.
Very well done, and a definitely a deserving winner. Good work and best to you in future challenges.
karmat |
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06/09/2003 09:05:02 AM |
I love this shot! Congrats!! |
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06/09/2003 08:52:44 AM |
Well done Ursula, I think this shot really conveys both a sense of sound and also mood. Great shot, definately deserved a ribbon. |
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06/09/2003 04:01:44 AM |
What a wonderful story being told here! Congrats on third place! Definately should be in an "emotive" gallery. |
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06/08/2003 11:01:08 PM |
Congrat Ursula! It´s a lovely shot. So simple, clear and clean. You´re really worth it. |
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06/08/2003 08:57:49 PM |
One of my favorites this week - excellent job and congrats. |
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06/08/2003 08:29:24 PM |
Just wonderful. Very deserving of a ribbon! Congratulations! |
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06/08/2003 08:08:42 PM |
Congrats Ursula! A much deserved ribbon, and a "kid pic" too! I love it! |
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06/08/2003 06:21:06 PM |
I can't imagine a more perfect candid shot. This is lovely. Cropping and composition are wonderful. Real joy to be found here! 10 |
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06/08/2003 12:33:16 PM |
My favorite shot this challenge, I'm guessing this is the winner..
10 from me, without any hesitation! |
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06/08/2003 04:31:35 AM |
I can actually hear her giggling. Love this shot and (in my opinion), you did an excellent job. 10 |
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06/08/2003 04:09:51 AM |
fab .... you can hear the giggles - 10/10 |
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06/07/2003 11:07:57 AM |
This is a happy, beautiful photo... and you can definitely "hear" the sound coming from this one. I like your lighting and the use of black and wwhite... very nicely done! |
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06/07/2003 09:54:05 AM |
Outstanding - a 9 for me. |
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06/07/2003 08:05:56 AM |
In this photo sound is something I want to hear. I want to hear the whisper and know why she is laughing, I am eager to hear how she laughs also. |
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06/06/2003 02:38:28 PM |
bit too bright on her hand, but I love the way their faces meet the edges of the frame. Very nice composition and choice of doutone. :) well done. |
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06/06/2003 09:39:34 AM |
beautiful work... the 'whisper' is audible as is the giggle :) love the black and white composition also... |
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06/06/2003 02:44:50 AM |
Sounds everywhere. 8 Morgan |
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06/05/2003 05:39:57 PM |
Simply a teriffic capture! I can almost hear the giddy exchange as I am typing. Great expressions, good exposure, and nicely cropped. Super job! |
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06/05/2003 02:30:02 PM |
I'm pressed for time and don't have time to make comments this week, but I had to leave one for this image. This is one of the best examples I've seen in a long time of capturing emotion and interaction with a photograph. The black and white works great... I cant find anything to improve, other than the back of her hand being a little blown out, but that's Ok. I give it a 10 and I hope to see this image win the challenge!!
JD Anderson |
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06/05/2003 07:24:03 AM |
This is so playful and just by looking at the photo I hear the whispers and giggles in my head. I think it's a great depiction of sound! |
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06/04/2003 10:54:29 AM |
I love the coloring on this. And I can almost hear them! |
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06/04/2003 10:22:14 AM |
Wonderful shot of human emotion. I wonder how posed this is - either way it's still a great capture and the light in her eye is perfect! This looks so amusing! i wonder what the joke is. |
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06/04/2003 07:48:19 AM |
Great job. I can hear the giggle that she's holding back. |
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06/04/2003 06:55:25 AM |
I love the idea! Very nice composition, B/W underlines the gossips |
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06/04/2003 03:12:13 AM |
My favourite in the challenge - beautiful! |
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06/03/2003 06:54:33 PM |
great shot! so what was said? it does beg the question |
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06/03/2003 06:08:05 PM |
i love it. it really conveys the giggling little girl, and the sounds, and just the genereal atmosphere. |
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06/02/2003 09:44:50 PM |
Just looking at this makes me smile, very genuine, 10 |
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06/02/2003 08:29:00 PM |
Oh, I like this idea! It makes me want to know what was said to provoke the reaction, and the connection to the challenge topic is quite clear. The man's hair is a little distracting at that angle but the girl is quite well framed. |
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06/02/2003 07:53:50 PM |
Nice feel to the image. I can hear the giggling. |
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06/02/2003 11:22:05 AM |
Good lighting and idea. I like the composition, also. |
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06/02/2003 10:26:14 AM |
Possibly the most unique and perhaps my favorite image from the challenge. That hand over the mouth, surpressing a giggle, and the squinted eyes, really make this image 'speak'. It truly feels as if you've caught an intimate moment, and the hushed voices and laughter just flows from this shot. Brilliant work. 10 |
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06/02/2003 05:33:27 AM |
10 for concept, 8 for execution: 9 overall. :-> A little more drama in the contrast/lighting might well have pumped it a bit higher, but still, very good. I hear the photo (which is my major grading criteria for this contest), and it's an appealing image overall. I like the tight crop. The composition's a little muddy, but it's still good. |
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06/02/2003 02:49:03 AM |
Beautiful shot, lovely expression |
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06/02/2003 12:11:26 AM |
Captured an intimate moment. |
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06/01/2003 11:09:06 PM |
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06/01/2003 10:58:54 PM |
What a fun shot! Nicely done and meets the challenge in my opinion. |
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06/01/2003 09:02:33 PM |
I love this shot. It put a smile on my face looking at her. 10 |
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