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09/23/2005 06:46:47 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
Good clear picture of a goodlooking model. I like the blurred background. It gives a sense of place without intruding. The yellow reeds and purple sweater work well, as they are complimentary colors. The colors from the sunset are great.
The only thing I see detracting from this very nice image is the expression on your model's face. The painful look (from sun in the eyes) doesn't work well for a portrait. If you have the chance to do this again, I'd suggest having your model face slightly away from the sun and if necessary, use a bit of aluminum foil or a diffuser to direct reflected sunlight to any ensuing shadows.
I wish you well in future Challenges. |
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09/15/2005 06:40:43 PM |
Her skin tones look a bit on the red side, but I like the lighting and the naturalness of your shot. |
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09/15/2005 03:54:18 AM |
too soft, not sharp enough. background colours are a bit muddy. |
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09/14/2005 03:24:57 PM |
I like the background and the way the shirt looks. the sun seems to be giving her face a hard time, a little orange and squinty eyes. |
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09/12/2005 08:53:46 PM |
the face seems really red. a little color balance would help this out tremendously. |
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09/12/2005 10:39:06 AM |
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09/11/2005 09:46:15 PM |
Beautiful lighting and background. |
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09/11/2005 09:45:28 PM |
Nice lighting- but I'm not sure if she stands out enough. I don't feel the POP in this one. But very good all the same. :D |
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