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11/22/2005 03:20:32 AM |
| I really like this portrait. Everything about it is very visually correct. The color of her skirt compliments her and the brick colors. The green color is also repeated in the weeds that are growing out of the alley path. Wonderfully composed. |
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11/21/2005 05:26:00 PM |
| I think id like it better if it had more contrast. |
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09/23/2005 10:33:51 AM |
Critique Club
Hi Logan. Good shot. You've captured a really nice expression on your subject's face. The shot looks like it is quite natural and has a good feel to it. Now for the analysis. The colors are somehwhat drab and the placement of the subject within the image is not very flattering. I find the drainpipe and the turquise paint between her legs to be distracting. I might suggest sharpening the image and playing around a bit with shadows and highlights. Though the angle is different, it makes your subject appear quite small. Looking through some of your other shots, I'd say that you could do better though it is not really "that bad" but it is really not "that great" either. This is just my opinion. Hope it is somewhat useful.
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09/16/2005 02:47:18 PM |
| You have a beautiful model. I wish she was in front of a different backgraund. I think you should do ok though. Good luck. |
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09/16/2005 09:33:05 AM |
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09/15/2005 01:16:43 PM |
| Is it my eyes, or is there a bit of a green cast on this picture? The angle seems to make the model appear shorter than she should too, imo. |
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09/15/2005 04:14:30 AM |
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09/14/2005 07:09:31 AM |
| The background really hurts this image. |
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09/13/2005 11:32:27 PM |
| nice expression. is it just the angle or is she really short? |
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09/13/2005 06:55:20 PM |
| Nice, casual portrait. I might have cropped out the dumpster at the very top, but again, nice portrait. |
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09/13/2005 09:39:11 AM |
| I don't mind that the subject is standing in an alley, but there's a lot of distracting stuff in the background. Nice expression on the girl's face and good colors. |
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09/13/2005 08:01:42 AM |
| I find myself looking first at her skirt, then her surroundings. I want the face to be the focal point and hers is not even well focused. |
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09/12/2005 08:30:19 PM |
| Pretty model, cool outfit, great smile and flattering look to her. She almost looks too well dressed for the environment she's in. Overall a good effort and a good full body pic. She's very photogenic, I hope you get to shoot her again with some different backgrounds. |
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09/12/2005 07:11:06 PM |
| the outfit and the settting don't make a good match |
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09/12/2005 06:13:22 PM |
| Perspective a little strage... |
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09/12/2005 12:55:30 PM |
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09/12/2005 11:35:59 AM |
| Cute pose..Love the alleyway. Nice. |
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09/11/2005 09:03:33 PM |
| The colours are nice as is the lighting. The angle of the shot has worked against you, I feel. By going from a high angle, you've given the impression that your model has very very short legs. |
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