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05/28/2003 09:59:11 AM |
*Critique Club*
They might as well just assign your entire portfolio to me. lol I've gotten the last 3. :)
This is such a simple shot, yet very effective. The color is great, and definately fits the challenge in my opinion. Blue/Orange.
Abstracts are hard for me to comment on sometimes. Most of the time focus is unimportant in an abstract, but there are parts here that I can see have good focus. The center of the photo along the bottom for example.
I like how this splits the photo. Not right in the center, but off center a bit, and also the bit of blue reflections that go over the orange looks nice as well.
I like how it seems to swirl together. While I'm not usually a huge fan of abstracts, I'm liking this one quite a bit. Excellent creativity and execution.
If I HAD to make a suggestion for improvement, I would mention that the little speckles throughout the shot are a minor distraction, and I'd find a way to remove those. Now that the challenge is done. Editing is definately an option.
~Heather~ |
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05/24/2003 07:31:45 PM |
| Engaging abstract. Very action packed with the diagonal lines. |
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05/24/2003 06:17:15 PM |
| Honestly - have no idea what I am looking at, but know I like it!. Great job - makes you want to keep looking at it. Love the composition and cropping, and think it looks great without a border. Hope you do very well in the challenge:) |
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05/22/2003 12:59:31 PM |
| I normally don't like abstract shots, but this one is interesting. I think it is the deep colors that I like. |
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05/22/2003 10:17:48 AM |
| Okay, this is just plain cool. I know, that's not a terribly useful comment, but it is my reaction. I like the way that the outer top to inner center edges flow light to dark in equivalent contrast levels, very nice emphasis (whether intentional or not). |
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05/21/2003 01:08:18 PM |
| I see photos like this and I like abstracts more and more. Even though I think it is slightly dark I really like the colors and the composition. I'm not quite sure about the wide cropping though. -T |
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05/20/2003 12:07:41 PM |
| Superb concept and execution. Now if only this photogra[her could spell.... |
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05/19/2003 03:07:45 PM |
| interesting abstract shot. |
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05/19/2003 10:46:01 AM |
| Strangely abstract. May give me nightmares tonight. I like the lighting of...whatever this is. |
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05/19/2003 04:12:11 AM |
| interesting abstract and use of complementary colors.. = 6 |
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05/19/2003 03:52:19 AM |
| Interesting to look at. Composition is ok, although there may be more blue on the right then is needed. 8 -danny |
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