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08/18/2005 10:13:01 AM |
** Greetings from the critique club **
The first thing that stikes me is too juch dead space, particularly along the bottom third of the image.
The second thing is the 'double-exposure effect' - just looks off balanced. The I realized why....the hand is more visible than the upside down head, so at first you notice the hand which would not be in the ocrrect anatomiacal presentation to be shooting a camer. After really searching the image, you notice the head under the camera..
The wrinkles in the shirt are a bit distracting also.
Colors are nice - bright blue on black. And the color of the cap is perfect as it does not over-power the face, but accentuates it. I like the lighting and shadows.
Over all, while this was nto a favorite shot of mine, it was very creative and executed fairly well.
- Linda
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08/14/2005 07:16:26 PM |
| Clever ghostly image. I love the deep blue tones. |
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08/13/2005 03:49:07 PM |
| Cool illusion. I like the blue shirt against the black background and the thin white border is a nice touch also. |
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08/12/2005 03:48:31 PM |
| Neat! However, I think there's a bit too much black space at the bottom, I'd get rid of some of it |
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08/12/2005 12:19:59 PM |
Nice job of holding the pose for such a long exposure. Interesting cropping, but I find something here a little lacking. Can't put my finger on it, but I don't find my attention drawn to this very much...
TC |
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08/12/2005 02:21:05 AM |
| I like the way you have used long exposure to create the ilusion. |
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08/11/2005 01:53:43 AM |
| Why the clenched mouth, first thing I noticed! Nicely done, illusion yes indeed! |
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08/09/2005 09:53:00 PM |
| great use of doulble exposure.. well done |
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08/09/2005 04:17:29 PM |
| Lighting is good. I don't know about the double exposure though. It doesn't trick my eye at all. |
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08/08/2005 11:06:51 PM |
Very good concept. Nice execution. At first I did not like the bottom 1/3 of dead space, but now, no, I still don't., sorry. The hands decreasing on opacity towards the bottom and continuing after the body ends is a bit strange. Maybe the camera alone? 8
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08/08/2005 05:33:30 PM |
| this is such a creepy shot. |
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08/08/2005 02:46:55 PM |
| I'm not really sure I understand the illusion. The hands and camera are definately not from the boy. Would like to see better focus on the boy. |
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08/08/2005 01:50:06 PM |
| cool title to go along with your well presented image |
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08/08/2005 12:59:09 PM |
| Very cool shot. Takes a moment to absorb it all, but you did a good job. |
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08/08/2005 11:34:06 AM |
| Great lighting, good capture, nice effect. |
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08/08/2005 09:49:00 AM |
| the model is blurry. I might like this more if the photographer were not visible and it was just an image of the camera and possibly the hand. |
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08/08/2005 09:13:30 AM |
| ohhh - took me a while to see that, need a bit more of the photographers head. Good illusion though. |
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08/08/2005 08:38:31 AM |
| the guy in the blue shirt seems afraid. Neat image. |
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08/07/2005 11:29:26 PM |
| This photo just lacks some body I think! Mwuhahahaha.....It's cool! I would of liked it a little sharper though! Well done! |
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08/07/2005 10:30:34 PM |
| A little fuzzy focus on the face, but nicely done. |
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