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05/21/2003 11:08:06 AM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
Very nice composition. You have done an excellent job of "filling" the frame without making it look like part of it was cut out accidentally. I like the "curves" between the two, and how they are "nestled" together. The depth of field is awesome in that the details are visible and clear, and the eye focuses on the "stem" of the onion.
My first impression was that perhaps you needed a more obvious secondary color, though you do indeed meet the challenge. To the casual observer/voter, it may appear yellowish instead of orange which is what I think you were going for. Technically and compositionally, this is an awesome shot, and would look wonderful on the wall of a kitchen or restaurant -- maybe a whole garlic/onion series, even.
Good work and best to you in future challenges.
karmat |
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05/20/2003 08:08:02 PM |
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Message edited by author 2003-05-21 00:09:11. |
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05/20/2003 07:57:08 PM |
| You can almost live off of onions and love. Appt. title. Your composition works really well here to evoke that feeling. The left onion seems slightly out of focus relative to the right. |
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05/18/2003 11:27:01 AM |
| Made me smile. Good subject, composition and lighting and an imaginative title. |
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05/18/2003 07:53:47 AM |
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05/18/2003 12:23:36 AM |
| onion and garlic.. 7 CREATITY !! |
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05/17/2003 08:57:21 AM |
| Interesting photo. Excellent detail! Not exactly sure how it plays into the "secondary colors" part of the challenge (is it the orange hue of the right onion?). |
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05/16/2003 04:31:10 PM |
| Lovely shot - great detail, texture, light ... pity about the graininess, and a real shame that i can't see that it meetws the challenge in any real sense. I guess at a push you could claim 'orange' for the one on the right ... |
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05/16/2003 12:42:46 PM |
| Very nice! - Lots of detail. |
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05/16/2003 06:44:45 AM |
| Very good lights. Confident and warm. Good composition. It deserves a 9. |
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05/16/2003 02:52:23 AM |
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05/15/2003 05:32:25 PM |
| Interesting shot, but the colours just don't seem right to me. |
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05/15/2003 09:46:18 AM |
| Where are the secondary colors in this image?? Nice composition, I also like the layout of the onions and the way that they add pattern and texture to theimage. |
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05/15/2003 09:42:19 AM |
| Very nicely composed shot. Good lighting and nice warm colors, though they seem to lean more towards the yellow and white than the complementary colors required for the challenge. All in all a very nice photo, good title too. 8 md |
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05/14/2003 10:54:17 AM |
| Lovely shot. Wierd, it looked better to me the first time I looked at it. It seems a bit grainy now, may it's at a high ISO. Either way, one of 4 10's this challenge. Great job. |
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05/14/2003 09:57:32 AM |
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05/14/2003 09:26:27 AM |
| oooh how sweet. should the garlic stem be cut of? 8 |
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05/14/2003 08:46:52 AM |
| This is an excellent macro. Great work!! |
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05/14/2003 08:04:40 AM |
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05/14/2003 03:56:13 AM |
| Awesome detail! This image is a work of art and so far the best shot I have seen in the challenge - 10. |
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