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05/23/2003 08:29:10 AM |
*Critique Club*
Hi there. I think this is a very nice first submission.
There are a few things that I would like to have seen differently, however, I think that it is still a nice attempt.
The subject itself is beautiful. I love the flowered pattern on the glass. It does seem a bit tilted here. Sometimes things are purposely angled for some dramatic effect, but it is off only slightly here looking more like a mistake than dramatic effect.
The subject is directly centered in the frame of your photo, which isn't always a bad thing, but if you were to add some negative space somewhere, that also helps to add some dramatic effect. Maybe add in some more of the reflection, and some negative space to the top of the photo? I'd have to see it to say if I'd like it, but it's something to try anyway.
The focus does seem a bit soft to me as well. This is a very comment side effect from shooting low light shots. A very important thing to remember, is DON'T try this hand held. Something else that will help A LOT, is if your camera has a timer, set your camera down, on a solid surface, and use the timer. That way, you will have NO camera shake when it is time to take the shot. The slightest movement throws it all off.
I am thinking that the softness of the flowers is also because it looks like frosted glass. However, the saucer looking thing also does look a bit unfocused.
Something else to look into is the shutter speed. If you have a camera that allows for you to adjust the shutter speed, you could play with shutter speeds and see what kind of effects that makes. Sometimes has pretty neat effects on low light shots. Just be sure not to touch or move the camera when shooting.
Overall, I like the shot, but think it's maybe a bit plain. could benefit from some dramatic angle, or something.
~Heather~ |
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05/23/2003 07:20:26 AM |
Thank you all, very much, for your comments. It has helped me look at photos
in a different way. |
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05/20/2003 04:38:37 PM |
| focus is soft, but I really like the warm glow and dark edges. |
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05/19/2003 12:16:05 PM |
| A beautiful piece, beautifully lit (and reflecting!) |
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05/17/2003 08:15:21 PM |
| interesting color... the image is a bit soft... can't say that it has much subjective appeal to me personally, but it is an interesting technique shot... = 6 |
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05/16/2003 08:35:30 AM |
| Meets the challenge fine but doesn`t inspire me. |
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05/15/2003 04:11:13 PM |
| I like the color but I'm really not sure what I'm looking at. |
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05/15/2003 10:52:32 AM |
| simple, nice, elegant. might have not cropped so closely so the photo would be of the contrast between the object within empty space versus basically being just of the object. |
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05/15/2003 08:12:22 AM |
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05/15/2003 06:55:40 AM |
| maybe image should be a little bit more sharper. = 7 |
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05/15/2003 06:02:06 AM |
| this is one of the best i have seen good job |
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05/14/2003 07:34:21 AM |
| Could be sharper, the flowers seem a bit blurry. Nice colors |
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05/14/2003 07:03:09 AM |
| Nice shot, just think it needs to be tilted a degree or two to the right. Well done. |
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