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05/22/2003 05:34:59 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club, Haraldur :)
Composition: I think the landscape format is ok, but I agree that putting the subject off-center would be a good idea. Somehow it doesn't look right the way it's now. The structure is "leaning" a bit to the left, out of the center of the image. Putting it on the right side it would "lean" toward the center.
Another change I personally would like to see is a bit _more_ negative space of the sky, i.e. a more wide view (zoom out).
Lighting: Great! This is the best part of the photo. I love the blue. The mix of natural lighting at evening and the glow of the glass thing is great. You wrote you wanted to capture the light when it was purple. I think it was a good decision to.It fits to the blue of the evening sky and this makes it more pleasant to look at because it doesn't distract from the clover neon sign.
Focus: As far as I can see the focus is good.
Challenge: Yes, the challenge was met.
Creativity: A good eye recognising alll three primary colours but the lighting you used makes this photo special.
Ok, that's it. I hope it helped you.
Stephan |
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05/20/2003 01:27:14 PM |
| hehe, flott mynd, annars margir Ãslendingar hérna :S |
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05/19/2003 03:17:04 AM |
| This was my first submission to a members challenge, and also my first 6+ grade. Wasn't sure if I should send it, glad I did. |
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05/16/2003 10:50:12 AM |
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05/16/2003 02:35:18 AM |
| I wouild have rather seen this in portrait format. Other than that this is fantastic, those blues are awesome. |
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05/13/2003 07:24:09 AM |
| cool shot. i would have tried to fill the frame more with the subject. failing that, put that whole building thing 'off-center'. |
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05/13/2003 06:25:37 AM |
| I like it. I wonder what it would be like with some of the empty space either side cropped away? Interesting building - what is it? |
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05/13/2003 04:53:37 AM |
| Flott mynd! þessi fer hátt |
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05/12/2003 10:29:24 PM |
| i don't mind the subject too centered, love the blue background ,it helps hold the subject in place........ primary colors in the center ties everything together coz it holds the viewers attention right where u intended them to look...... |
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05/12/2003 07:39:23 PM |
| Very cool,my favorite so far 10! |
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05/12/2003 01:38:08 PM |
| like this a lot. its one of my favourites |
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05/12/2003 12:56:27 PM |
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05/12/2003 10:48:24 AM |
| Wowhooooo! What a find, good shooting. |
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05/12/2003 09:30:02 AM |
| I find the subject a bit centered. Otherwise I like it. |
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05/12/2003 08:56:44 AM |
| excellent primary color shot... I think it would have been even stronger as a vertical shot which would have allowed you to not be 'dead centered' and fill more of the frame... |
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05/12/2003 05:19:16 AM |
| A bit over-saturated!? Good job though! |
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