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05/22/2003 10:34:15 AM |
*Critique Club*
I like this. I think that the setup is excellent. The angle and framing/cropping is near perfect. If I had to make a suggestion on that aspect, I would say to crop the yellow bowl differently, maybe closer to the middle of the bowl. However, I would not want the symbols cropped at all.
The lighting seems to be a problem for me. I think that the image appears too dark, especially near the upper left and on the yellow bowl. There is shadow in the upper left creating some extra darkness. I think that had there been some extra lighting that the colors might punch a bit harder. Maybe even jump right out of the screen. lol
Since you photographed glass subjects, extra lighting would also mean extra lighting control so you wouldn't get annoying glares on the glass.
Your focus and clarity are good. I like the detail in the dishes. You have done a great job with this.
~Heather~ |
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05/18/2003 07:12:26 AM |
Love the composition, and the colours are great. Excellent shot, well done. |
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05/18/2003 04:41:33 AM |
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05/16/2003 01:16:41 PM |
Clean, simple, sharp and to the point. |
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05/16/2003 09:41:15 AM |
I like the detail on the pottery and the simple composition. its very effective. |
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05/16/2003 06:04:56 AM |
Interesting set up. Effective too, so simple! |
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05/15/2003 06:50:42 PM |
I like the colors and the lighting. I think the cropping/composition could have been a bit different. Maybe cut off at half the bowl and plate and an equal portion of the red?? Nice shot though. Some distracting stuff in the red area. |
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05/15/2003 07:55:42 AM |
Simple, but very effective. Nice work! |
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05/13/2003 07:07:42 PM |
I really like the spacial balance in this with the colors. Nice job. 10 |
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05/13/2003 10:49:20 AM |
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05/12/2003 12:28:40 PM |
Wow. Nice effective use of colours and curves. Good job. Jacko. 9 |
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05/12/2003 12:25:05 PM |
This makes a lovely abstract because of your simple and effective composition and lighting. |
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05/12/2003 10:53:12 AM |
Just a super shot....I like the simplicity here. Appealing. |
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05/12/2003 04:19:07 AM |
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