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05/09/2003 07:17:39 AM |
Hi Amy,
Greetings from the Critique Club:
Just to start out...I really like your photo. I liked it during voting and, of course, I still like it now. In my opinion, you have taken what would be a simple monorail snapshot and turned it into photographic art. What makes the picture is the reflection of the setting sun and horizon in the front car. The colors are beautiful.
If I remember correctly, the monorails at DisneyWorld move quickly, so I'm impressed that you were able to freeze it and get it in such nice focus. Just the front nose is a tad blurry, so I can tell that it was a moving monorail.
The angle of your shot is pleasing to the eye. I disagree with one comment that suggested you crop out part of the left side. That is the best part of it where the colors are rich. It also shows the track in front of the train and allows it somewhere to go. Your border is simple black and not overdone. Frames your picture nicely.
My only complaint is that it is a little overexposed on the right side. Actually, I think you could crop off a little more of the back of the train (perhaps the last two sections) and not lose the effectivness of the shot. In fact, the closer crop would make the front car more dramatic. I think it will also take out some of the negative space of the blaa sky and fill your picture in better. Just a thought.
Overall, it is a very nice photo and meets the challenge head on.
Good luck
Connie |
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05/06/2003 07:37:02 PM |
| Terrific composition. Nice sharp focus. |
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05/06/2003 03:02:34 PM |
| Gorgeous light and great use of diagonals in the composition. Great shot, well done. |
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05/06/2003 09:55:09 AM |
| nice angle and nice lighting |
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05/05/2003 04:14:28 PM |
| Love the contrast and composition. Very well done! I would not change a thing. |
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05/05/2003 10:10:55 AM |
| i like this image, the way the sun reflects off of the monorail really adds to this image, the colors are displayed sharply, good work 5 |
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05/05/2003 09:49:13 AM |
| nice use of color and nice job on the clarity in this picture it turned out very nice |
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05/03/2003 09:52:22 PM |
| Nice lighting... must have been at dusk. |
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05/03/2003 04:59:38 PM |
| Aside from a slight yellow cast, this is excellent. Could maybe use a little crop top and left. |
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05/02/2003 07:59:30 AM |
| beautiful composition... i really like the yellow glow of the sun on the train/rail... excellent work :) |
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05/01/2003 02:33:21 PM |
| i think it is a great photo, well done! |
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05/01/2003 07:29:17 AM |
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04/30/2003 08:59:15 PM |
| Nice entry. The colors and exposure are well done. The perspective and composition are also nicely executed. |
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04/30/2003 11:23:13 AM |
| nice perspective and contrast against the sky. very well done. |
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04/29/2003 10:09:37 PM |
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04/29/2003 08:36:54 PM |
This is the best transportation picture i've seen so far. I have no complaints at all.
I love everything about it - the colours, the angle, the framing... perfect
well done! you get 10 |
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