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04/28/2005 11:11:49 PM |
Yes, I agree that the focus is not quite on the eyes - but it was a very quickly taken shot and the only one of him taken at that time (I think his name is Hiroki). I almost didn't enter it, but I thought, what the hey, it had good comments at my PAD site. |
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04/24/2005 05:55:25 PM |
charming face -- a little orange but that may be my monitor |
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04/24/2005 03:46:34 PM |
A lovely portrayal with that ring of innocence. |
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04/24/2005 02:08:42 PM |
Seems a little soft focus on the eyes. |
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04/24/2005 10:19:34 AM |
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04/24/2005 06:19:16 AM |
If I only saw the eyes I would still love this shot |
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04/24/2005 03:14:47 AM |
Nice full frame. Wish the eyes had a bit more "sparkle" to them. |
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04/23/2005 10:58:06 PM |
Wonderful expression. Would have loved to see a tighter focus and more clarity in the eyes. |
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04/23/2005 10:07:42 AM |
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04/23/2005 07:42:17 AM |
Very nice portrait, and a very photogenic subject. The framing is very good, the tighness of the crop does a lot for the image. However the eyes are a little dull, you could try dodging the whites and dodging the (very pale) catchlights...it would make it an excellent picture. Good work. |
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04/18/2005 06:54:25 PM |
Great smiling eyes but missing the sparkle. It is just a bit to dark. |
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04/18/2005 06:15:01 PM |
need better focus, and lighting could be more interesting: the eyes are totally dark (check out similar portraits by librodo for insipration) |
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04/18/2005 05:54:11 AM |
A bit more dof and it would be perfect. |
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04/17/2005 11:33:58 PM |
Nice and expressive, wish you´d sharpened this a little more and focus is on the mouth and nose and not eyes as it should be, pity.....focus on eyes, then move the camera slightly down and press, the nose is always closest so it "steals" the focus.. |
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04/17/2005 09:08:21 PM |
I don't care for the close crop on his chin. |
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04/17/2005 08:41:19 PM |
Great portrait! One of my favorites of the challange! I gave it a 10 and then realized I had to come back to comment, so here I am. Wonderful!!!! |
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04/17/2005 08:37:17 PM |
Good closeup shot. I would have liked to see the focus on the eyes instead of the tip of the nose though |
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