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03/18/2003 10:11:48 AM |
Critique Club Comment:
This is a nice looking bridge. I think that you have take a wider shot then needed. I think that with the lines in your surroundings the bridge itself gets lost. With the conversion to black and white, you have furthered the bridge being lost. The angle isn't bad, but with your current crop my eye is drawn to the stop sign and not the bridge. I would like to see a crop of just the width of the bridge. This would minimize what other objects my eyes are drawn to. Also, maybe by keeping the photo in color, we can see more of the detail in the bridge as it would surely be a different color then the background trees.
Moving in on your subject can sometimes produce great results. Don't be afraid to try something more artsy with your angles and crops. You may be surprised that an otherwise ordinary snapshot can become a piece of art. |
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03/13/2003 04:15:35 PM |
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03/10/2003 03:50:23 PM |
Nice b&w photograph. Sure looks stark and cold with the snow and bare trees.
Your photo is sharp and in focus but I'm not intrigued by it. It just seems very busy for some reason and I can't say why, perhaps just too many branches and trees in the way. I wonder if that railing in front is the problem, what if you moved further in front or beyond the railing?? |
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03/10/2003 09:40:30 AM |
| good photo, i like the idea. |
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03/10/2003 07:02:10 AM |
| I wish this were more in focus, for your use of light and line are wonderful. |
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