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03/10/2003 09:24:23 AM |
CRITIQUE CLUB
Challenge: Meets the challenge, but the line is a little detracting, like it ends before it reaches the barn. It's a great landscape picture!
Technique: I can see you went to the end of the line which was good, but I think if you would have crouched down and focused on the line instead of the barn, it would have been more impactful, while giving more attention to the line. I would be curious how this picture looks in a sepia tone. I think the colors, etc would make some great sepia hues.
Overall: A great job, and you followed the challenge rules well. There is a little noise to clear up, but that's easy to do "post-challenge". I would be curious how this would look at a lower angle.
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03/08/2003 10:13:41 PM |
| This is a nice all around photo but I think the foreground is too heavy. There's a spot in the center foreground which I would cut and everything below it! Although this would be about 1/3 of your image lost, you would still maintain your lines. |
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03/07/2003 01:23:17 PM |
| the leading line seems to lead away from your subject, given the title |
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03/06/2003 02:06:23 AM |
| Nice lines to the ranch. Would like more DOF to accentuate the corrals and barns. Nice capture with all that snow |
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03/04/2003 05:47:43 PM |
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03/04/2003 02:38:39 PM |
| Very charming sinuous leading line and solid composition. 9 |
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03/04/2003 09:34:40 AM |
| To me it looks like the path leads away from the barn. |
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03/03/2003 11:46:11 AM |
| Nice work.....really a good shot, congrats to you. |
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03/03/2003 04:52:43 AM |
| You are half way there. My eyes are being led to the snow hill and then from there to the silo. |
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03/03/2003 01:41:04 AM |
| this is an interesitng 'line' but the line doesn't lead to the subject very well.. - setzler |
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03/02/2003 11:39:27 PM |
| Excellent capture. I love the soft colour (white snow) with the line leading its way in a curve like motion. Excellent job and GL. |
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03/02/2003 08:43:53 PM |
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