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01/17/2005 12:58:16 PM |
Originally posted by glad2badad: Cool wine opener. This shot could have benefited from more of a studio type look instead of the kitchen counter. Kind of a yellowish cast from overhead indoor lights? |
Acutally, there is a window to the left and it was the sunlight coming in. I learned from this shot about the need to white balance. |
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01/13/2005 07:11:49 AM |
Cool wine opener. This shot could have benefited from more of a studio type look instead of the kitchen counter. Kind of a yellowish cast from overhead indoor lights? |
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01/04/2005 05:16:27 PM |
This is a very interesting wine opener, I would like to see it made more the focus of your picture, the background is distracting. |
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01/03/2005 06:22:19 PM |
NIce idea. Looks like an intersting subject. The lighting seems kind of flat and slightly dim. The background seems kind of busy and unappealing, even with the short dof. |
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01/03/2005 03:05:04 PM |
The wine bottle opener is a wonderful piece of machinery. You'll probably hear this a lot, but the background (stove, cupboards, etc.) are not the best setting for this beauty. If you want to isolate a subject, try one of several techniques: check out a local crafts store to see if you can find sheets of posterboard, or even large pieces of drawing paper; failing that, use a drape of - carefully ironed, no creases - cloth. Finally, your placement of this beautiful piece in the frame is very good. A good background and maybe a sturdy tripod would make this a winner. Good luck in future entries. |
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01/03/2005 08:58:46 AM |
This could have been an awesome picture if it was taken with a solid black background. The subject is very appealing but the background here is too cluttered. The white balance is way off and the picture is not too sharp. I would try practicing with this piece taking it in front of a solid background. |
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12/31/2004 10:46:03 AM |
Too colur cast. This needs white balance |
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12/30/2004 02:47:10 AM |
I know the background is tough to shoot around but it detracts from your marvelous mechanical item (you've really captured the detail but it's lost amongst the cabinets and cooktop) |
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