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12/16/2004 01:21:06 PM |
Composition: 6, nothing wrong here. kinda like the negative space
Technical: 5, looks fine
Appeal: 5, doesn't grab me, but doesn't make me want to run away
Challenge: 1, you blew it here...nothing is broken
Overall Calculated Average Score: 4 |
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12/15/2004 08:16:29 PM |
Hmmm... cute, but not that appealing. Sorry. |
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12/15/2004 04:48:10 PM |
Returning for comments:
Now, this is funny and creative. A cool effect. bumping up. |
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12/15/2004 06:55:02 AM |
The black background is well achieved. The set-up, framing, and lighting though need work. There is a kind of bronze quality to the finished shot that I quite like, but overall it's indistinct. The light: well, galss is difficult to light, and is usually more a matter of lighting a background and using the distortion of the shape of the glass to bring its presence to screen. Framing: what looks like an attempt to emply the rule of thirds is difficult when there is nothing here other than the subject - as is, it just looks off centre. The effectively employ the rule of thirds, one needs some context, some surrounding to parallel the main subject, I think. I imagine this side-lit from the left, so that the shadows fall into the negative space area to image right, and a background other than black, and I think you'd have a more dpc-friendly shot. |
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12/14/2004 07:57:11 PM |
I just like this. I swear the candle light is flickering. I am a big Halloween (the original movie) fan and this is reminiscent of the opening credits; I can almost hear the eerie music. Very appealing to me for my own personal biases. If people can give 1's based on emotions and personal preferences, I can give a 10 for the same reason. |
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12/14/2004 07:06:12 AM |
It doens't strike me as broken to be honest... and the composition is lacking IMO. It;s a little boring. |
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12/14/2004 01:50:51 AM |
unhelpful comment removed
Message edited by author 2005-10-05 06:37:05. |
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12/13/2004 10:46:33 PM |
Composition: 8
Technical: 7
Appeal: 7, Very interesting
Challenge: 7
Overall Score: 7 (weighted) |
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