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03/02/2003 12:38:32 PM |
As a photograph, this is pretty sweet. However, there are a few things that are worth saying: have a look along the top - you seem to be having some severe barrel distortion (the line along the top - the two windows in particular). You can solve this by zooming in a little bit (I am assuming you shot this on full wide angle?) and walking further back. If you look at the bottom of the building, your camera was a few degrees to the left also - both are really composition issues, but they do make the pic look a bit scruffy, I think.
As for the picture itself: Great shot, but not a lot of yellow - which was probably what cost you a place in the top10 this week. Keep trying! :) |
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02/22/2003 06:56:52 PM |
I have a really strong urge to pick those weeds. Nice shot. Good luck. |
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02/21/2003 06:08:00 PM |
An engaging, interesting image. Have you tried moving the camera around so the yellow isn't so far to the side? The focus here is the bike. |
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02/19/2003 03:20:54 PM |
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02/19/2003 02:21:27 AM |
Interesting photo. I like the colors. You might have increased the interest by cropping out the building just above the doors. Also the picture could be rotated just slightly. Good job. |
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02/17/2003 07:08:56 PM |
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02/17/2003 05:22:53 PM |
Waste of talent.... (the graffiti I mean). |
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02/17/2003 05:10:43 PM |
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02/16/2003 10:30:45 PM |
Cool but should have cropped/zoomed on the yellow on the right and moved the bike so it's over to the right also. |
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02/16/2003 08:06:07 PM |
Nice. I think I just voted on your Rythm submission (same subject matter). |
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