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03/02/2003 01:00:19 PM |
Well. It IS yellow. Technically there just isn't much to critique here. It just seems a little too simple IMO. Maybe getting closer to the ground and shooting the line traveling out into infinity with a shallow dof would be better than shooting straight on... it just needs something. The line is splitting the photo directly in half, but I feel like there should be something on one or both sides if you're going to center it and title it like this. You might try desaturating everything but the yellow so that the pavement is more grey than blue. Having a black and white image with one shot of yellow would be cool, but I still think it needs a little more to it. |
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02/24/2003 05:48:00 AM |
Maybe try a vertical/ portrait framing? |
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02/23/2003 09:28:47 AM |
Simple yet strangely appealing.
7, Kavey |
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02/17/2003 07:20:48 PM |
Would never have thought of this. So simple yet so right on. Love the texture that comes thru so clearly. Can't fault you on this one. Not exciting but right on photographicly. |
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02/17/2003 05:17:44 PM |
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02/17/2003 01:04:26 PM |
Great humor, good work, good luck. |
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02/16/2003 09:12:54 PM |
Yeah, it's a good thing they have those lines on the road. |
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02/16/2003 08:48:43 PM |
Good idea, but should have shot a more interesting group of yellow road lines. Nice idea! |
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