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10/27/2004 06:09:53 PM |
| Congratulations on 14th placing with this image which evokes a sweet sense of sympathy. |
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10/26/2004 04:43:11 PM |
| Very clear photo & perfect tones. I'm sure you're getting a lot of comments on the wrinkled backdrop, but you live, you learn, eh? But your model is adorable and more than makes up for the background. Great job! |
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10/25/2004 07:08:39 PM |
| Great shot, but I wish I couldn't see a white linen backdrop. A dark background might have worked better, or even the view outside a window, especially if it looked classroomish. |
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10/25/2004 02:12:56 PM |
| beautiful composition, a little to bright on the upper left. |
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10/23/2004 09:17:49 PM |
| The subject is great, b&w treatment works... but that sheet in back kills the shot. |
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10/23/2004 10:03:39 AM |
| i think the wrinkles in the sheet somewhat hinder this but it is tell well taken. nice focus and tones |
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10/23/2004 02:38:52 AM |
| :) I like this shot and the subject's position. I can also closely relate to this feeling from a few of my past classes. |
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10/22/2004 06:53:16 AM |
| Cute and well done :) I like the lighting and the 2-tone effect. |
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10/22/2004 12:14:29 AM |
| Your focus worked real good but could improve more on compozition. I would took it more from left side to show more of her crossed arms which lool real nice. I found bacground pretty strange aswell... Keep shoting. |
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10/21/2004 05:15:06 PM |
| This would have been even better in color. |
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10/21/2004 11:54:15 AM |
| This is a nice photo, I just don't care for the wrinkle in the background, 7 |
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10/21/2004 09:36:53 AM |
| Good except for the backdrop cloth on the right side. Maybe a strong backlight on that side would obscure the cloth and highlight the subject. 6 |
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10/21/2004 09:18:48 AM |
| Very odd looking backround. My guess is you got a white sheet and used that and I don´t think it´s working very well. Either it should be moved further back to make it more blurry or just skip it alltogher and try to set this in an actual classroom. Anyway, good shot nonetheless, I like it. |
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10/20/2004 03:42:18 PM |
| I like everything about this photo except for one little thing: the folds showing in the sheet behind her. Otherwise, it's one of my favorite in the challenge. Good luck ;-) |
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10/20/2004 12:53:13 PM |
| like the b&w, suggest adjusting dof to blur backdrop, blown out left portion pulls my eye away from your well composed student and books. |
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10/20/2004 08:58:24 AM |
| Like the belt on the books! My wife came up with that idea also! Takes me back to my school days! Thanks! Cute shot!! |
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10/19/2004 09:43:04 PM |
amen sister!lol
the grayscale is nice the image i easy to associate with good job! |
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