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12/01/2004 11:41:29 AM |
Great shot. Saw it took second at betterphoto.com. Congrats on that and the top 10 here! |
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10/27/2004 06:00:41 PM |
Gordon, Congratulations on 8th finish with this great composition. It lives up to your outstanding work. |
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10/27/2004 05:09:50 AM |
Congratulations on top 10... |
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10/26/2004 11:51:26 PM |
Congrats with top 10...really liked this shot. |
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10/26/2004 04:29:16 PM |
Great Depth of Field and also my eyes move right through it. It also brings back some delightfull memories. :) |
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10/26/2004 04:18:37 PM |
Ah school. I really miss them good naps. Great shot by the way. I really like how the books draw your eye to the main subject. |
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10/26/2004 09:21:59 AM |
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10/26/2004 04:55:34 AM |
Really good composition - I would also like to see it "back to front" focus on face - books out of focus. Great use of DOF. Looking at it from a commercial point of view it is certainly one I would have used - there is just enough space foreground left side for some text |
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10/25/2004 01:25:42 PM |
nice composition. The color of the books carefully chosen would help the final resul. Good the focus choosed and the depth of field. |
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10/24/2004 06:37:34 PM |
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10/24/2004 12:16:30 PM |
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10/24/2004 04:56:14 AM |
really interesting colour choice. I lke your setup, a nice change from the other sleeping students. The dof is good, but would have preferred no front blur (right hand side of photo). still one of my favourites for the challenge. |
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10/23/2004 08:14:17 AM |
way too many books for one semester. I like the idea |
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10/23/2004 04:41:30 AM |
Great composition and use of depth of field. I think the blown out hightlight at the back of the photo is a bit distracting though. |
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10/22/2004 07:51:14 PM |
more depth of field would have put the face to be in focus, the books are taking too much attention away from it |
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10/22/2004 02:48:50 PM |
I'd love to see the boy more in focus, either in addition to the books or instead of them (not sure which) |
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10/22/2004 10:03:45 AM |
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10/21/2004 06:41:08 PM |
Good job, i really like it! |
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10/21/2004 05:09:21 PM |
This would have been even better in color. |
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10/21/2004 12:27:22 PM |
I would like to have seen a greater DOF to see the student better. But even so, this is an excellent perspective shot. |
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10/21/2004 09:32:56 AM |
A greater DOF would improve this image, particularly if the subject person was in better focus. Nice angle and composition. |
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10/21/2004 08:50:01 AM |
Great composition. I am not sure it would have worked better but if you have any shots with "reverse" DOF (focus on his face and the books out of the DOF) it would probably be good too. 8 |
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10/21/2004 08:21:35 AM |
interesting angle...great idea. I would have liked to see the man a little more...overal great job! |
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10/21/2004 05:02:11 AM |
Nice composition, I like the tunnel effect, dof, angle, and crop. Though asleep I wonder if his hand would be holding the pencil so firmly? |
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10/21/2004 01:23:07 AM |
Very well done...i love this redish juicy color. Great focus and compozition. Good luck. |
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10/20/2004 10:56:35 PM |
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10/20/2004 08:39:05 PM |
the depth of field is missing in the picture.otherwise the composition and the theme are great. |
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10/20/2004 02:31:23 PM |
good DOF and good complexity of details to show chaos |
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10/20/2004 12:37:36 PM |
with this point of view, and the fact that the guy is blurry while the books are in sharp relief make me feel as if the books are falling on top of him. Took me quite a while to realize he's asleep on the desk. Try putting him as the focal point and not the books |
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10/20/2004 08:38:00 AM |
Excellent perspective... I like the dynamics provided by the tilt of the camera. It looks like you have been buried by the books :) |
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10/19/2004 10:13:12 PM |
i really lke the perspective here |
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