Greetings from the Critique Club!
I see a very surreal approach to this challenge in this image, which also makes me a little uneasy. I don't know why, yet.
Yes, this is a water challenge, and there is water splashed on the glass, and it does add interest to the photo; I like the composition. I think, however, that the soft-focus effect and low light on your model makes her look a bit blueish and hence...well, either very ill or dead! Hence the feeling of uneasiness, the slackness in her hand and half-closed/closed eyes just give too much a sense of remoteness from the viewer.
I do hope this critique has been useful, feel free to PM me,
Susan |
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