I Give UP!
by TCGuru

Comment:
This is an effective comp. The model is perfectly expressive. I like the sense of motion with the falling papers. It's well lit. I just noticed one of her shoes is unbuckled. Stylistic choice?

Success
by jasonlprice

Comment:
This would make a great motivational poster. There's nothing to be criticized here. It's effective, thoughtful and well executed. 9

Arrrrrrrrgggggh Fatal Error!
by kingskingdom

Comment:
Well lit, nice contrast. Well balanced highs. Great, expressive model. There's little, if anything, wrong here. well done. 8

Walking Papers
by rmezzo

Comment:
This is pretty hysterical. DOF is perfect, just enough to see that the "boss" is an asshole. Technically sound, perfect crop, well balanced highs. nicely done! 9

Mobile Computing
by jvdpc

Comment:
Love the lighting, DOF and crop. The model is effective, and the image speaks "business". Well done.

Make The Slopes Your Office
by skasuba

Comment:
We have some great tonal qualities here. It's an effective image. It's suggestive, and technically sound. I could definitely see stock photo here. Love the high contrast, as well. Well executed! 9

Automatic Millionaire?
by elizabethj

Comment:
Great idea, IMO. I'm not sure the execution is quite where it could be. I'm seeing halos around the book. I wonder if that's a PP choice, or a slow shutter. The image should have been exposed for the face, and not the book, because the post-its are the star of this image, not the book, IMO. Also, you can see the tape on the post-its and it detracts a little bit. The image is underexposed overall, as well. But like I said, a pretty humorous concept, in general.

time is money
by saintaugust

Comment:
Great concept and execution. Very clever, indeed. Not much to say here 'cept I like it. Well done!

Workaholic
by gloda

Comment:
I like the concept. I like the model's expression and the sense of urgency created by his looking at the watch. The dramatic lighting is nice, The only thing I might have done differently is cropping out the lamp. It detracts a touch, IMO. But overall, a really well executed idea.

Taking care of business
by Connor

Comment:
I like this capture alot. It speaks volumes. The only thing I notice is the highlights in the top right corner on the wall. It almost looks like you used a wall sconce to light the scene. But overall, a nice effort, IMO.