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White Ice or Red
05/10/2003 02:13:02 PM
White Ice or Red
by Dim7

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Nice idea with the symetry of the glasses, and the coloured glasses. In this case I feel it would have worked a lot better if you had kept it simple. The different type of bottles at the back are an annoying distraction, as is the wooden floor/table - white wall clash. I would have like to have seen this with a black backdrop, and floor. If that did not give enough oomph to your shot, prehaps you could have tried using plain white bottles, filled with red/blue water (with prehaps white backdrop/floor).
would you like it on the rocks or up(side down)?
05/09/2003 01:11:26 PM
would you like it on the rocks or up(side down)?
by Pep Ventosa

Comment:
Fantastic idea. I think that the inner read boarder does spoil it and should have been left out, or put just inside the black boarder. Might have paid to use some claps/rope (something) to raise the upside down glass off the table, to give it an impression of almost coming down over the top of the base.
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Mounds of Color
05/09/2003 01:02:46 PM
Mounds of Color
by decoteau

Comment:
Nice idea, unfortunately it has been spoilt by your very shallow DOF. I think this foto would have been a lot better if they had all been in focus. Am also not sure what is on the left side of the foto, but looks as though a finger/thumb might have crept, giving the pale pink haze. Would also have suggest a one colour background, rather than the two colour one you have opted for.
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Old Glass
05/08/2003 02:46:35 PM
Old Glass
by matt

Comment:
I think this could have been a lovely shot, if you had done the following:
Taken the picture so that it was level. Cropped it so that there was only the barest hint of a frame from the window frame. Taken the shot when he light was different as it has washed out most of the colours (it might have been better on the inside of he house/church)
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Glass
05/08/2003 02:31:59 PM
Glass
by Allen

Comment:
Very novel concept, let down by the following:
Seems to be a lot of noise (could have been prevented by using more light and a lower ISO). there is also very uneven lighting, far too much from the left, might have been better to have had your light from behind the fern.
The ashtray looks dirty, so if it had been poperly cleaned prior to the challenge it might have paid to have bought a new one which might have been a bit clearer.
Feel that the empty space on the left should have been filled with the fern to create a more symetric foto. Would also have been nice to see the colour of the flowers the whole way around the base of the ashtray.
The Urbis
05/08/2003 02:26:59 PM
The Urbis
by Paulk

Comment:
Very interesting glass building, which I believe would have made a much better shot own its own, as the patterns with the glass panel are fascinating, however it is let down by the lamp pole? on the left.
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Crystal Lovebirds
05/08/2003 02:08:44 PM
Crystal Lovebirds
by willtata

Comment:
Nice subject, pity your DOF is so shallow, would have been nicer to have seen the whole lot in focus, so could get the reflection coming back at you, and would have put the middle two birds in focus. Would have been better to have kept the two in the middle in focus rather than the outside ones, as I believe it woul keep your focus better.
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Zebra Features
05/08/2003 02:05:51 PM
Zebra Features
by Eliza

Comment:
Really interesting shot - looks as though it is a wine glass upside down in a stainless steel sink. I really like the ripples and light created at the top left and right and bottom right, and think it is a pity it could not be reproduced on the bottom left.
Am also not sure about what looks like hair, in the bottom right. Very good shot otherwise
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photographer in the glass
05/08/2003 05:17:23 AM
photographer in the glass
by thatguy

Comment:
While this picture meets the challenge (it is not terribly innovative). I think you would have been better off choosing a window without blinds, that would have given a better reflection. There also seems to be a lot of noise in this picture which tends to spoil it (would suggest using a lower ISO - or if it was manipulated in software, less manipulation)
Key West Travel...
05/04/2003 04:01:32 PM
Key West Travel...
by Kneeforu

Comment:
To me this picture is more about a lovely sunset and the reflection that it casts across the water (even missed the boat the first time), and I think that pretty much says it all - you are not really on the subject here. How could you have scored mroe, well by focussing on the subject, which would have ment getting in closer to make the boat the focal point (prehaps even as a silhouette) with the sunset as the background.
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