Tubuku and Holeshot November 19 044.jpg
by bennettjamie

Comment:
Lighting here looks better but it is kinda snapshotish. But I see a big crowd and poles don't help much. Overall it is a nice live shot. Maybe next time a not so straight on angle.

Tubuku and Holeshot November 19 115.jpg
by bennettjamie

Comment:
The lighting does seem kinda off but I see you were running short of time light wise. I think the focus is a tad off but that could be a slow shutter due to the low light. Next time up the ISO and make the shutter speed faster.

Sailors
by Tranquil

Comment:
I like it. The scaffolding in the background doesn't help any but I like the overall feel of the image.

elegance
by Mephisto

Comment:
Well I love the lighting as well. I like the red. I would suggerst you get some sort of seperation between her butt and the background. s it is now it seems like her leg is chopped off. Other than that you have a fine image here with some great lighting.

The Dark Side of Town
by Hipychik

Comment:
I would have voted this a five if I would have voted in this challenge. My reasoning behind that would be I would rather see the OPEN sign in sharper focus and maybe someone sitting on the sidewalk would add tons of interest to this. The light post is in the way but not much you can do about that but cut it down. Then someone would have to bail you out. I would suggest you go back (if you can) with a model and try having him/her sit very still on the edge of the sidewalk on the right side. Also try a slightly longer exposure. I know it is a lot to ask but if you could and ever get a chance to do that you might be pleased.

Hilary
by latentflip

Comment:
Very nice image. The lighting does look totally natural. I would suggest the same as surfdappler. Bring that light a little more toward the front to fill in those eyes. But it is a great image.

La:shes:
by Kali

Comment:
I like it. Good soft focus. I think it would have more impact with the eyelashes in better focus. But it is a calming image as is.

Glowing Sky
by tomcat

Comment:
The light makes this a very interesting photo. My only suggestion would be to maybe run it through Neat Image to reduce the noise in the darker parts of the image.

Roberts3.jpg
by idnic

Comment:
As you already know this is my favorite of the bunch. It is hard to critique someone you look up to. My only quirk with the photo is her toe but that is a minor flaw to this great image.

Calmed
by ryand

Comment:
I love the simplicity of this image. Nice composition as well.