couple
by gaurawa

Comment:
The lighting, color and focus are all spot on with this shot. I like the fact that neither are looking into the camera, gives it a natural feel. I'm also a big fan of burning in the top as you have done, really brings your eyes straight to the subject. My only complaint would be to crop out that teeny bit of out of focus animal in the bottom left corner. Other than that, great stuff.

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by kevrobertson

Comment:
This is definetly my favorite of the bunch. The lighting is real nice, hair works well and I can't help but wonder what she is thinking about or looking at. Good job and keep shooting these.

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by kevrobertson

Comment:
Excellent tight crop head shot. Love the nice soft skin from the even lighting and also perfect light skin tone. There are small things I might play with like sharpening her mouth a tad or perhaps her left(acutally right) eye but you pretty much nailed this on. Great job!

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by kevrobertson

Comment:
The pose here is pretty nice, fairly relaxed, although I sort of wish she was doing a little something more with her hands but it's hard to say what. I find that the most difficult part of modeling along with the expression. This could also use that yellow cast removed. You've lost the whites of her eyes but you may be able to dodge them enough to get a little detail. The only other thing is what looks like sensor dust on the wall in the background.

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by kevrobertson

Comment:
The smile is nice but her teeth are really yellow. I like the natural tilt of the head, very playfull. The tight crop works well here. Things I might mess with, depending on how much you use photoshop, would be dodging her eyes to make them pop a little more, removing the yellow heavy from teeth and slightly from the skin, lightening the background to seperate her from it a little more, and cloning out the chair. This is of course all subjective but just what I would do if this were my shot.

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by Krisby

Comment:
Cool shot! Love the make up done in this one and the near abstract feel to it. A couple things I would try to fix. The eyes have a green cast in them that is very unnatural which is kind of suprising because the blue looks great. The only other thing i might experiment with is cropping so the eye brows are at the top of the frame. It just seems a little awkward having them so low. Just an idea but overall this is one my favorite shots of yours.

Miss Innocent
by Sunniee

Comment:
I like the idea of the shot and the lighting is great but I'm not sure that I can agree with whats been said about the expression. It just seems a little to stiff and obviously posed for me. Its hard to put a finger on exactly what causes it. I think it might be the stiffness of the hands and not so much the actual expression on her face. The bottom right dosen't bother me like it did others. Either way this is still a well done and beautiful shot.

Pushing Up Daisies
by Aeroglyphics

Comment:
This is a very creative entry and I have a hard time figuring out how you did it. The composition works well. You have blown out some details in the flowers and I'm not sure the selective desaturation really adds to the shot. Another thing that might help, although would definetly take more time, is having more daisies in the shot. The last thing that could stand a little improvement is the facial expression of the model. It seems almost pained and could stand to be a tad more pleasent. With all that said you still did pretty well and I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future.

Time is running out!
by arnit

Comment:
Wow, this is great. Honestly had me laughing out loud. Great idea and wonderfull execution. Your work never ceases to amaze me. The only thing I wish is that there was a more interesting background or even just more dramatic clouds. Definetly not a big deal though.

A Tiger's Beauty
by L1

Comment:
You've got yourself a nice crisp clean image of this beautiful tiger. The depth of field works well and the color is strong. Still though there is something missing from this shot. The expression is so stiff and straight forward it is almost as if it could be a statue. It might even help if he was looking to the right just to have him clearly engaged in observing something. Or maybe a tighter crop would help give it more 'wow' factor. Still a nice shot though, hope this helps.