Best Friends
by ace flyman

Comment:
Great lighting and capture.

Kayle
by fordmanf1

Comment:
By biggest suggestion would have been to really zoom in close on her face, with the light. The dead space of the floor and placement makes this one feel a bit odd. The lighting on her face from the window is very natural though. Also, the focus is quite blurry. Some unsharp mask would have helped! nice attempt though. -3

Tell the Truth
by bvoi

Comment:
Good lighting, focus, and color. The eyes very plesant to look at. Perhaps some slight dodging of the whites would have given them a bit more focus. (or if you did this already, maybe a tad more). Overall, a very pleasing portrait. -7

Dawn Breaks on a New Life
by Baron152

Comment:
A good picture, great sunset and focus, but not really a studio portrait. Unless the background is a drop, in which case this is awesome! ;)

Youthful exuberance
by Stagolee

Comment:
The focus is a tad blurry. Some unsharp mask would have helped, but a nice pic none the less.

Long John Silver
by AlexSaberi

Comment:
The eyes are a dodged a bit too much, but overall a nice, interesting portrait. -6

Jenna
by Kelli

Comment:
Poor lighting on her face. The angle is a bit odd as well. -4

The One of my Dreams
by Kivet

Comment:
The lighting on the face is a bit too harsh, and that combined with the soft focus gives her an almost corpse feel. The whiteness does really bring out the hair, eyebrows, eyes and lips, however. An interesting portrait, for sure. -6

Graveyard Shift
by DustDevil

Comment:
Interesting picture, but whole face is a tad too orange. -5

Vera - 2006
by kari1

Comment:
A little more light on her face would have brought out more detail.