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DigitalSoulComment by kari1: ::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
I think that this is a love it or hate it shot.
Composition:
This is the area I think that it lacks most. It is not working to any rule of photography that I know (and I don't know many) .. .and just seems like a little something in the courner of a whole big picture of a doorstep.
Subject:
It does say success ... even though I don't think it is a four leaf clover it is still a brave plant to grow in that little gap.
Technical (Colour and light):
The colours are over saturated with the red being too red. I think there is a little too much bakground in this shot and with a tighter crop on the growth it may have done better.
To grow its vote?:
You did ok ... keeep it up.
Summary:
A good safe shot .. you have a great eye for the unusual.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via
the PM system.
Cheers
Kari
So cool to have a response and it is amazing that the colours are natural .. I don't think I have ever seen any that are so crisp as these.
I appreciate your response ... and am always happy to hear from someone I have reviewed.
Cheers again
Kari
Message edited by author 2006-06-04 23:25:53.