Two of a kind
by ehale92

Comment by Spongetoast:
Out of focus. Weird Crop

Two of a kind
by ehale92

Comment by HeiSch:
I believe this picture can be much enhanced with a little more thought. First the lighting: not enough to separate the dark tones of their jacket from each other, then too much reflection in the doors. 1-2 steps to the side and the reflections would have been gone. Then ofcourse you would have to rearrange your models away from your current centered approach. This seems to very static and unnatural. You're forcing your will and thought onto them. Did you ask them how they would want to arrange themselves for your picture? They would either get closer because they are close friends and show that, OR they would separate further from each other. Currently it apears very halfhearted, no commitment, one stands the other is already walking away. Oh and then 2 small technical issues: you are taller than they are, correct? So get down to their eye level and don't look down on them. The picture is taken handheld, right? You can see the softness everywhere. You should focus on the eyes or the mouth (same focal plane in this kind of shot). Try to retake this shot with these models but let them decide how they want to present themselves. You just try to capture what they show you.

Two of a kind
by ehale92

Comment by Photoqueen:
cute girls, cute idea, I actually think it wouldve looked better, I can only imagine the colors they have on, and with the color of the lockers, it wouldve popped and looked great in color!

Two of a kind
by ehale92

Comment by Denise:
Seems OOF, but I like the B&W.

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by ehale92

Comment by SkyeMari:
This picture is very interesting. I think that the background is more paranormal than the "ghost". But it still fits the challenge.

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by ehale92

Comment by Rachel53:
personally i think this could have been a lot better but it matches the theme so good job .

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Comment by Hotspam:
I got bit up by mosquitos out that late. How about you?

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Comment by Art Roflmao:
Scuze me - is this where the Klan's meeting tonight? :P

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by ehale92

Comment by buzzy:
nooooooooooooo?

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Comment by Haneck:
Well, the little pink flowers are over-exposed, which really hurts the impact of the image. Also, I'm not sure what that thick, straight object to the right of the image is, and wonder if the photo might look better without it. Hope this helps! :)