Day Four
by LMA128

Comment by bassbone:
Outstanding in every way - those eyes seem like two worlds

Day Five
by LMA128

Comment by ErikV:
Beautiful model, beautiful technicals. Nicely posed, great right eye, I like the way your hair is falling down and I like the empty space.

Day Five
by LMA128

Comment by stupidcat:
i like the high key look and the eye(s) have so much soul. Great photo!

Day Five
by LMA128

Comment by blad:
i have no critique, again, looking through your work this is what i expected. beautiful!

Day Five
by LMA128

Comment by yanko:
I like the crop but the negative space feels wasted. Your day four photo used it much more effectively, IMO. The triangles at the top and bottom gave the subject balance and support where as here the negative space is just sitting there with nothing to add.

Day Four
by LMA128

Comment by Paul:
Spot on!

Day One
by LMA128

Comment by rmezzo:
First impression:
I love the old feel to this and the overlay is subtle enough that it doesn't overpower the photo. Great start.

Suggested improvement:
That one big part of the overlay (smudge left center) is really sticking out. I might try taking that out.

Day Two
by LMA128

Comment by Jedusi:
very sweet shot - could perhaps be a little sharper - unless you want a soft look ? But doesn't detract.

Pretty girl and nice smile.

Day Five
by LMA128

Comment by sadiebird:
great detail in the eye and lighting. the pose reminds me of photokariangel 's shot:

Day Five
by LMA128

Comment by SandyP:
The model needs no critiquing. She's gorgeous. And this is a very cool portrait. The only thing I would have done differently is maybe clone out the stray hairs. Sorry if that's already been mentioned and you might be sick of hearing it. I always try to comment before reading what anyone else wrote.

I think its beautiful!