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01/06/2010 02:04:55 AM |
| I think this is right on the money - great high key shot. |
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01/05/2010 08:10:25 PM |
| what the heck would we critique about the model? "uhhh this model is far too cute and has great eyes.....eeeeyuch no more NO MORE!" |
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01/05/2010 03:36:02 PM |
| Beautiful model, beautiful technicals. Nicely posed, great right eye, I like the way your hair is falling down and I like the empty space. |
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01/05/2010 02:13:30 PM |
| i like the high key look and the eye(s) have so much soul. Great photo! |
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01/05/2010 12:52:24 PM |
| i have no critique, again, looking through your work this is what i expected. beautiful! |
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01/05/2010 12:45:11 PM |
| I like the crop but the negative space feels wasted. Your day four photo used it much more effectively, IMO. The triangles at the top and bottom gave the subject balance and support where as here the negative space is just sitting there with nothing to add. |
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01/05/2010 07:06:25 AM |
great detail in the eye and lighting. the pose reminds me of  photokariangel 's shot:
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01/05/2010 04:24:22 AM |
The model needs no critiquing. She's gorgeous. And this is a very cool portrait. The only thing I would have done differently is maybe clone out the stray hairs. Sorry if that's already been mentioned and you might be sick of hearing it. I always try to comment before reading what anyone else wrote.
I think its beautiful! |
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01/05/2010 04:11:07 AM |
| Excellent SP with a well chosen angle. I like the crop too but the skin is a little too red. |
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01/05/2010 03:37:50 AM |
| Great highlights. Love your tight crop and how your face fills the left part of the frame. Nice use of neg. space. :) |
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01/05/2010 03:36:53 AM |
| nice self portrait. I would be happy with a shot like that. The high key touch here works well as does hiding you of your eyes to add a little bit more mystery. I would remove those few loose hairs in post production or be extra careful when taking the shot. To see a little bit more of your lovely eyes try moving the soft box (it looks like one anyway) around (closer) a little bit further so that it reflects off the white of your eye. Or you could tile you head around to the camera a bit more. |
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01/05/2010 12:04:43 AM |
Well Leanna I'm with Ken, you have a great look.
In terms of the picture, I like the high key combined with the way in which you make both eyes pop even though your left is barely visible.
The use of negative space and the fade from your hair into it works very well indeed.
I may have been tempted to remove that stray hair but in some ways it works so not sure |
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01/04/2010 10:30:55 PM |
Perfectly beautiful! ...oh, no critiquing the model, sorry.
GREAT work! Could be an album cover - Taylor Swift-ish-like :) |
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01/04/2010 07:14:10 PM |
| Nice work! Very stunning eyes! |
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