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| 10/31/2006 05:37:56 PM |
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| 10/31/2006 08:28:47 AM |
Praying Playerby jstnknightComment by Traff: Just my observations - take what you need and bin the rest...
Would praying not be a pre-match rather than post-match activity? Well, I'm a Brit and I'm not sure about the protocol here - so I'll give you the benfit of the doubt on that one. :)
I like the crop taking out part of his boot - just saying that 'cos I'm guessing you may get picked up on it by others. I'm not saying they're wrong but for me it adds to the off-centred feel and gives it a bit of edge somehow.
Think I might consider a slight crop from the bottom just to remove the white line bottom right (distracting once you've spotted it).
Not sure what the partial saturation achieves here - for me it takes away from the overall mood of the image since I notice the team logo more than the activity of the player.
Nice exposure and the patterns in the grass work well in directing attention towards the players bowed head. |
| 10/30/2006 05:07:09 PM |
Praying Playerby jstnknightComment by mosa: A beautiful photo. Yet the challenge expresses: ââ¦after the game is over and the players and people have gone homeâ :(
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| 10/30/2006 07:53:47 AM |
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| 10/29/2006 01:20:11 PM |
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| 10/27/2006 07:23:52 PM |
Praying Playerby jstnknightComment by GrayGhost: Looks like a player is still there. Nice selective desaturation, I think that shallower DOF would give better isolation and blur out the grass distractions. Also would like to see the whole foot. Hope that it's a prayer of thanks. |
| 10/27/2006 05:10:41 PM |
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| 10/27/2006 11:59:35 AM |
Praying Playerby jstnknightComment by L1: Nice use of selective desat; interesting and appealing image. I'm sure you're getting hit with the DNMC votes. I would suggest not cropping out the foot if at all possible; it makes the image feel "amputated" if you pardon the pun. |
| 10/27/2006 10:29:02 AM |
Praying Playerby jstnknightComment by PDXKim: This image sets a mood and I think the conversion to B&W was a good choice.
I would have liked this image better if the boy's foot wasn't cut off and perhaps you moved him down to the bottom of the frame. Being in prayer, I think leaving all the space above his head (like a church with the open, lofty ceilings) would feel "right". This images also has more of a "before game" feel to me - I'll admit to not having watched any youth football games but it seems prayer tends to come before the game; regardless, if his uniform (and/or dirty skin) had shown the effects of having played then that would have been moot.
For me a big part of this challenge was how to make an image (of a sports venue) compelling and interesting without people. I'm marking you down based on my interpretation of the challenge criteria.
Thanks for sharing. |
| 10/27/2006 06:04:47 AM |
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