You do the Math...
by terik65

Comment by KarenB:
Critique Club:

Initial: Good message.

Overall: The sign is centered, with quite a bit of sky around it. It seems to me that it would benefit to be off center.. preferably to the right of the frame. The quality is suffering a bit, and, sorry to say, has no real "wow".

;0)

You do the Math...
by terik65

Comment by jgillard:
Cute! But not cute at the same time ;) jgillard7

You do the Math...
by terik65

Comment by blick:
good message

You do the Math...
by terik65

Comment by johnny_justjohnny:
not much besides the sign going on, sky don't speak to me too loud.

You do the Math...
by terik65

Comment by Wheeler1992:
math was never my strong suit but I do like the photo

Where the mountains meet the desert...
by terik65

Comment by zadore:
...from Critique Club...

Hi Teri

FIRST IMPRESSION:
Nice scene. :|

COMPOSITION:
I don't have any problems with the setup of the photo. Maybe getting lower and shooting 'up' a bit more would get you a bit more sky and eliminate the bottom of the photo (path?) :)

TECHNICAL:
Your lighting seems a bit dark on the foreground. Also, there is quite a bit of noise on the photo. I realize that you are using a Sony camcorder, and I'm sure you don't have much control over exposure/shutter. :|

ARTISTIC:
I honestly think that this was a nice scenery to which the camera did no justice. :|

OVERALL:
A fair shot, technically poor. :(

Cheers and good luck in the future challenges.

You do the Math...
by terik65

Comment by Lustre:
The sign is a tad underexposed. It looks like the sun was behind the sign - I had to revisit my sign in the morning to get around this. Framing is interesting and works ok - there's just a fraction of something creeping into the bottom left of the image, but that's not a big distraction. Your title is very good.

You do the Math...
by terik65

Comment by zadore:
a bit too dark...i don't particularly like the centered composition...good luck :)

You do the Math...
by terik65

Comment by Turbotech:
Strong shot Good background.

You do the Math...
by terik65

Comment by tomzinho:
i would have liked to have seen more sky in the photo. as it is, the sign is underexposed - your flash might have helped with this.