one good eye
by bimble

Comment by Neat:
Spooky.

one good eye
by bimble

Comment by Luci11e:
spooky

one good eye
by bimble

Comment by cowboy221977:
I don't believe much effort was put into this

uplight
by bimble

Comment by cpanaioti:
*** Critique Club ***

First Impressions: Good use of leading line

Exposure: Though the bright light in the reflection forms a good leading line, the actual lights are a big distraction. Bright areas always draw the eye. In this case, being overly bright, keeps the viewer from exploring the rest of the photo.

This is a tough situation to remedy straight from the camera. If you expose for the lights then the rest of the image will probably be black or close to it. Use of a highlight/shadow type adjustment in post processing may help remedy the situation somewhat.

Composition: As stated before, good use of a leading line.

Impact: If the actual lights weren't so bright this image could have more impact. Just need to bring out more detail in the shadows.

Cheers!

Keep shooting.

Colette

Carnivale boy
by bimble

Comment by Melethia:
He looks a wee bit weary of his duties at this point. Good light and color. You could crop a bit off the left; it would also support a square crop, I think, due to the angle of his head - forms a nice diagonal.

uplight
by bimble

Comment by puzzled:
This is a tough shot to get when there's so much going on, especially with the small viewing area allowed. I like the stars in the street lamps. I don't much care for the rest of the picture though. Sorry. If you want more details, feel free to send me a pm. I'm kinda wondering if this is Whiterook because it looks like New England.

uplight
by bimble

Comment by The_Dentist:
Very narrow aspect ratios always make me feel like it's a snapshot, a composition that you didn't intend, but rather stumbled upon in processing...

Day 34 - Peekaboo
by bimble

Comment by citymars:
That's too funny -- what a little ham! It almost looks like he's reaching out to spin the table.

EDIT: Oh, I just read the story. :-(
I don't think I've ever heard before of a statue about a rape victim.

Message edited by author 2007-08-07 21:34:53.

Day 31 - The other junction
by bimble

Comment by kellyrc01:
I don't think this is cliche at all, I think it's a great reflection shot!

Day 34 - Peekaboo
by bimble

Comment by Germaine:
Nice notes, and an interesting shot with that nervy kid in juxtaposed with the statue and its story.