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| 02/07/2006 04:02:29 AM |
windmill.jpgby crystaldmComment by Koriyama: Basically, the composition is good, but the subject is a bit boring. Sorry. You could wait until the cloud patterns are really interesting, shoot again, then dodge and burn the photo until it becomes striking. |
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| 02/07/2006 04:01:15 AM |
pink.jpgby crystaldmComment by Koriyama: The composition is good here. You use the rule of thirds well. You've also got a good DOF, which helps separate the flower from its background. The negative bits for me are: 1. The focus seems a bit off; 2. The background is dark which kind of depresses the overall feeling of the photograph; but the biggest point is that the treatment of the subject is a bit bland. You need to find something special about the flower, get right in, concentrate on an aspect of its form, use a filter to blur and romanticise it. Good luck with your photography. |
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| 02/06/2006 06:39:37 AM |
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| 02/03/2006 12:59:33 PM |
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| 02/02/2006 03:50:30 AM |
"Baby Blue"by crystaldmComment by PatGoltz: These days it is refreshing to see the whole face of such a beautiful little girl, and see her as a person. |
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| 02/01/2006 04:01:41 AM |
"Baby Blue"by crystaldmComment by Jutilda: Funny I thought of the same idea with the jewels coming out of the eye like tears. I'm wondering if it wouldn't be more effective to have her light blue outfit be a deeper shade. Lovely child. Nice eyes!! 7 |
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| 11/01/2005 02:32:15 PM |
Hangin' Outby crystaldmComment by Presidente: critque club**
very cute, I dont know why the toy monster truck is in this shot as it does not aide to the shot. the shadow being casted on her cheek is a bit dark but the shot is very nicely exposed aside that. i like how the complection is captured as well. no signs of overexposure as well good job.
although I see no "what" factor to the shot, its a nice snap shot nonetheless. |
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| 10/25/2005 02:52:15 PM |
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| 10/23/2005 11:05:00 PM |
Hangin' Outby crystaldmComment by persimon: I think your lighting looks great. The image might have more "What" apeal if you had turned the image to the left. I think your background is blurred enough that it wouldn't be obvious. It would look really weird to have her little ponytail sticking straight out. |
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| 10/21/2005 03:48:39 PM |
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