Presence
by angelo75

Comment by JopsyDaisy:
I love the simplicity of this picture. Beautiful!

In front of the window
by angelo75

Comment by MadMan2k:
I like it a lot. Excellent light play on the textured walls, and the processing really brings out the imperfection and makes everything very interesting.

Portrait
by angelo75

Comment by snaffles:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

I see a very surreal approach to this challenge in this image, which also makes me a little uneasy. I don't know why, yet.

Yes, this is a water challenge, and there is water splashed on the glass, and it does add interest to the photo; I like the composition. I think, however, that the soft-focus effect and low light on your model makes her look a bit blueish and hence...well, either very ill or dead! Hence the feeling of uneasiness, the slackness in her hand and half-closed/closed eyes just give too much a sense of remoteness from the viewer.

I do hope this critique has been useful, feel free to PM me,

Susan

In front of the window
by angelo75

Comment by Paul:
Gorgeous image. 10.

In front of the window
by angelo75

Comment by Melethia:
Lovely light - nice work with the cell phone!

In front of the window
by angelo75

Comment by ubique:
The graphic blocks of this picture are interesting. Tones, shapes and proportions are all very nice, very collected. It gives the photograph two identities: one the literal subject, and the other with a more emotional feel. In fact it seems like a reverse abstract, where a realistic representation can, with a bit of imagination, be resolved backwards into a figurative one. You probably didn't mean any such thing, but I don't care at all about that. It's in my 7+ selections whether you like it or not. Thank you.

In front of the window
by angelo75

Comment by lady:
Very Nice

In front of the window
by angelo75

Comment by hiltonmd:
Very nice composition and use of light.

In front of the window
by angelo75

Comment by armando_m:
awesome moment and light

In front of the window
by angelo75

Comment by tanguera:
Interesting choice for orientation