My Desk Shrunk
by TomsPhotos

Comment by snaffles:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Initial impression: made me lol, so an automatic 8, had I voted.

Technical: Comp is pleasing, DOF is very shallow, there's a little glare to the left, the lampshade vanishes against the bg. Some oof clutter in bg...but...

Artistic: Lots of fun and work went into this shot, don't think it wasn't noticed and appreciated! Love the phone off the hook and the painting in the bg. Obviously the voters liked it, finished in the top 20. Well done!

FWIW: I would've tried to get the chair in focus, to emphasize the scale, and left the hand as is. All in all a fun shoot, definitely got across the whole concept of Miniature very well!

Feel free to PM me with any questions,

Susan

Message edited by author 2009-05-27 18:22:27.

She will Find You
by TomsPhotos

Comment by TatumAD:
...this is really creepy.

She will Find You
by TomsPhotos

Comment by cth:
lovely but distractingly dark (unless it's my pc calibration?!)

She will Find You
by TomsPhotos

Comment by KarenNfld:
This is really dark. I can just barely make out the dolls in the background. I bet a lot of people won't see them.

She will Find You
by TomsPhotos

Comment by boone168:
I think your photo is underexpose.

Mercury's Ride
by TomsPhotos

Comment by Art Roflmao:
"... because that's what ZZ Top drives." LOL
Nice job.

Mercury's Ride
by TomsPhotos

Comment by bassbone:
a sweet ride - i love the guy behind the wheel - has he been in the car since it was made?

the image itself has a bit of that 1950's early 1960's advert look - placing the car in a familiar spot with people in the car

a nice job overall

Glamours Life of a SneakerHead
by TomsPhotos

Comment by Focalone:
An interesting stretch of the concept.

My Desk Shrunk
by TomsPhotos

Comment by davisambrose:
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My Desk Shrunk
by TomsPhotos

Comment by GeneralE:
The teacher will have a problem reading your homework!