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Challenge: Miniature II (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Nikon D300
Lens: Tamron AF 18-200mm f/3.5-6.3 XR Di II for Nikon
Location: inside with used with studio lighting
Date: May 14, 2009
Aperture: 5.6
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/80
Galleries: Still Life, Studio
Date Uploaded: May 17, 2009

 Set up some doll house things and used my new lighting set to take the picture and i thought of putting my hand in it to compare the size of the desk.

Statistics
Place: 18 out of 115
Avg (all users): 5.9512
Avg (commenters): 6.2500
Avg (participants): 5.6500
Avg (non-participants): 6.0964
Views since voting: 1215
Views during voting: 294
Votes: 123
Comments: 7
Favorites: 0

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AuthorThread
 05/27/2009 02:20:33 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Initial impression: made me lol, so an automatic 8, had I voted.

Technical: Comp is pleasing, DOF is very shallow, there's a little glare to the left, the lampshade vanishes against the bg. Some oof clutter in bg...but...

Artistic: Lots of fun and work went into this shot, don't think it wasn't noticed and appreciated! Love the phone off the hook and the painting in the bg. Obviously the voters liked it, finished in the top 20. Well done!

FWIW: I would've tried to get the chair in focus, to emphasize the scale, and left the hand as is. All in all a fun shoot, definitely got across the whole concept of Miniature very well!

Feel free to PM me with any questions,

Susan

Message edited by author 2009-05-27 18:22:27.
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05/24/2009 06:57:25 PM
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 05/24/2009 12:12:24 PM
The teacher will have a problem reading your homework!
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 05/23/2009 11:55:04 PM
I lIke it.
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 05/23/2009 06:36:26 AM
I really like how you included the hand for scale. Well done! Not voting.
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 05/22/2009 07:37:00 AM
The nitpickers might take issue with the OOF hand, but I think your concept is clever. 7
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 05/18/2009 08:42:51 PM
Who in the world has a colletion like this? Great job
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