Secret Places
by PSUBecker

Comment by anderaaron:
nice coposition

The First Mistake
by PSUBecker

Comment by kiwiness:
Cute! A priceless expression!

The First Mistake
by PSUBecker

Comment by CraigD:
Two thinks that I think may improve the shot, which is a good shot, is to one have here looking directly into the camera like the camera is adam, and second to see if you could get the grapes in focus, they are so big that they almost need to be in focus.

Secret Places
by PSUBecker

Comment by tuzik02:
lots of jpeg artifacts... if you save your original as uncompressed tiff, then do all your edits, and only save your final version as a jpeg, that should help the problem... 4.

The First Mistake
by PSUBecker

Comment by RHoldenSr:
I wanted to ask?

Instead of the Shhh.. action with the finger to her mouth.
What do you think of a seductive glance just away from the camera showing her blue eyes and biting the apple?

Just an idea and my 2 cents;


Calvus

Secret Places
by PSUBecker

Comment by anireno:
A funny sunset? :)

Secret Places
by PSUBecker

Comment by tolyanchik:
nice idea

The First Mistake
by PSUBecker

Comment by Musicman:
I think this a lot better than you current entry. It have a garden feel to it. Focus is good and there is no signs of pixels. With a "My Secret Garden" title I think I would have given it a 6 or 7

Secret Places
by PSUBecker

Comment by coccus:
A treasure in the garden!

The First Mistake
by PSUBecker

Comment by RHoldenSr:
I agree with zeuszen
I also think the composition could be improved.
The leaf on the left is distracting. Maybe just the model and grapes?
Was this sunrise or sunset? Did you try any flash fill?
The skin tones look a little blue on my monitor probably due to the shade. Maybe the flash fill may help?
Try having the model look more towards the camera showing more od her blue eyes?

Calvus

Message edited by author 2003-07-30 22:55:11.