Child of a coal mine
by short_ribs

Comment:
Its a really cool image, but to be honest with ya, i'm not digging the black and white conversion with the color pop in the eyes. Now, if this was in real life where you painted the person black and gray, that would be cool...

but i can tell its photoshoped and i see this to much already... But the composition is amazing.

Being Enzo Maisano...
by hotpasta

Comment:
I really like the idea and the use of putting yourself all over the place doing different things... the only thing that is throwing me off is the gaint head that is only showing eyes at the top. I know it should have a higher meaning, like its the real you that is hidden behind all these mask of things you should be in society or life. But its just distracting.
If I was to do anything to this photo, I would crop in on it with the one of you and then book being the main focus.

Thats just my suggestion.

Live! Tonight! In The Basement!
by mchalmers

Comment:
loving this photo. A+ on using everything and taling a story about yourself.

tinman II
by lowonenergy

Comment:
its a good composition and lighting, my only problem is that there is no mid-tons what so ever. But it could be with what you have on yourself...or a over-sharpning stuff.

One thing for sure, that i would had added was a catch light in your eye.

Photographer Self Portrait
by rio78

Comment:
very nice!

Finally on Top
by Dufus

Comment:
Very nice self-portrait that tales a story about yourself.

A+

First Snow
by rmezzo

Comment:
Really nice photo but your eyes are TOO much...

take it down some and make it match yourself and you'll have something nice.

My Left side
by sfmorris

Comment:
Nice pose and lighting on yourself...just use a different background because with the experession on your face and the background, i feel like they clash with each other. I know its easy to use black and white but try to mix it up with some color, cause another problem is that you lose yourself (your arm and body) in the backdrop also.

Anyway, you did nice with the lighting and popping your eyes out.

Self examination
by agrimace

Comment:
Nice even portrait. Good job!

Stare
by pipersd

Comment:
Way to go with popping your eyes out and composing yourself...problem is the photo is extermly flat...to much grays and blacks, try to make your cheeks pop out by dodging them or something...or dodging your shirt. The photo just feels dead but you have a good idea on how to make it work.