Ti amo
by Anastasia

Comment:
Nice image. I would have liked to see more of the right side of her face - perhaps pullng her hair behind her ear. Otherwise very beautiful.

Summer Slips Away Softly
by EssAreDubya

Comment:
I like the idea of having the dark silhouettes however I find the power lines distracting from the dramatic sky. I am also drawn to the white spot in the trees.

last of the summer beauties
by ursula

Comment:
Nice macro work and the colors of the background are great soft pastels.

A new life
by bryantbus

Comment:
A very nice idea. The only thing I might change is to remove the fabric from the left of the mother. I find that it pulls me out of the left of the photo. Perhaps something that frames the mother and father and continually brings your eye back to them.

Beach Hut 79
by KHolt

Comment:
Dramatic and moody feeling photo. Well done.

Decorative Masonry
by GeneralE

Comment:
I like your choice of subject but believe that a different angle would have made a more dramatic photo. I feel like I am missing a lot with this photo.

Saltburn Pier
by Falc

Comment:
Good perspective. I like the continuing lines out to the water. Well done.

Pastel flats
by Wobble

Comment:
Interesting lines -nice subject. I would have liked to see a view where the tree is not included in the shot. For me, it distractst from the clean lines of the building. Otherwise, wonderful exposure.

Blue Lines
by 777STAN

Comment:
I really like the coloring and the mood of your photo. I do feel that the lighting on the floor and coming through the window are too harsh and it has caused you to loose the line detail you were shooting for to meet the challenge. I also find the light switches pull my eye to them and there are a couple of satellites to the left of the window - however, I love how the door frame pops. Keep up the good work.

caught
by margiemu

Comment:
I like your idea but feel that you have lost a lot of detail. I think that is the result of two problems. First - your focus is not quite spot on and second - the backgroud behind the web is too busy. Try placing a black card behind the web next time. Keep up the good work - I can't wait to see your next submission.