Fishing with Rice Krispie Treats
by veocon

Comment:
This is a really nice shot with a fun creative angle. Unfortunate it had to be used for this particular challenge because it dosen't fit well. Would have done in aweomse in lots of other challenges.

Shock the Monkey
by SJCarter

Comment:
What a hillarious expression. The space on the right is good but I think I would crop a little off the top. The eyes are real powerfull but the red seems a tad too saturated. Lots of the highlights are blown but it dosen't really bother me since its on the edge of the monkey. I can see why you wanted to take the cage out, it makes for an unfortunately distracting and unnatural background.

Snow Monkeys
by SJCarter

Comment:
The white background nearly overpowers the monkeys although I understand not wanting a cage in the shot. If you're gonna do that much, what if you tried dropping in a sky? Certainly harder to keep from haloing around the monkeys but it would be cool. I would tone done some of the white on the monkeys themselves. The eyes are fantastic and really grab the viewers attention.

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by jwillerton

Comment:
I would like to have seen the white car farther to the left of the frame to balance the shot a little more. As is, its weighted heavily to the right and the space dosen't really balance it for me.

by Canadian_eh

Comment:
The off center compostion works well for the shot and the depth of field really helps it pop. The focus is spot on as well. Not much to change. If you use photoshop, it would be cool to bring the green out in the eyes a little more. The background would really make the eyes pop.

Message edited by author 2006-06-12 18:43:53.

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by Anastasia

Comment:
The color works very well in this shot and I enjoy the models soft expression. Is there a reason to have the enourmous white sides on this shot?

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by Anastasia

Comment:
Very lovely shot of a beautifull model. The pose works fine for me although her left hand is a tad awkward, it does still seem to be actively engaged in doing something though. The one thing that bothers me here is the blown out highlights of the waterfall that surround the models face. It makes it hard to concentrate on the lovely model when the water is glaring in from the background. Maybe you could mask it off and tone it down a tad bit. Other than that, I really like this.

Ambition
by babylon

Comment:
Very low key, I wish it had just a little bit more light so we could see the subject better. Not more of him, just brighter where we can already see in the shot. You could probably stand to a lose a littl of the negative space as well.

A Moment Before
by Djabordjabor

Comment:
The post proccesing her is very well done. I would really like to see the next moment. Good job. 8

\\\"My Offering\\\"
by stardust8488

Comment:
Way overprocesed