refreshing!!
by fredroj

Comment by jmsetzler:
Greetings from the Critique Club :)

Hi Fredroj...

This is a nice composition for a product photogrpahy shot. There are a few issues that could probably stand a little extra attention. The out of focus background works nicely, but there are some hot spots in it that compete for attention with your main subject on the left. Correcting an issue like this requires changing your lighting. Since your camera is probably taking a majority of its meter reading from the bottle in the foreground (which is darker), it's allowing the light in the background to get more exposure than it needs. Changing the position of the light source, or adding an additional light source on the primary subject would help even out this exposure a bit.

The text on the bottle is also rather important for this shot. Some additional depth of field would help you bring that area into sharper focus.

Keep up the good work :)

John Setzler

'NightSpeed'
by fredroj

Comment by Firstrich1:
The sense of speed, the light you captured running right across the frame looks very nice I also like the DOF on this. I had voted before an had give this an 8 but I liik again and think...10

'NightSpeed'
by fredroj

Comment by h3h0wn:
fun and smooth.

'NightSpeed'
by fredroj

Comment by nborton:
very nice. i also like the white boarder.

'NightSpeed'
by fredroj

Comment by MyDogMaverick:
Very cool

'NightSpeed'
by fredroj

Comment by Twocentz:
Nice Photo. I like the colors that turned up. The quality is excellent. The only things that disctract me are the car sitting on the other side of the road. But I guess you can't go tell the driver to move it ;o) I also find the lit up door on the far left a bit disctracting. But that could be cropped out if needed =) Good luck!