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11/12/2004 05:07:42 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club :)
Hi Fredroj...
This is a nice composition for a product photogrpahy shot. There are a few issues that could probably stand a little extra attention. The out of focus background works nicely, but there are some hot spots in it that compete for attention with your main subject on the left. Correcting an issue like this requires changing your lighting. Since your camera is probably taking a majority of its meter reading from the bottle in the foreground (which is darker), it's allowing the light in the background to get more exposure than it needs. Changing the position of the light source, or adding an additional light source on the primary subject would help even out this exposure a bit.
The text on the bottle is also rather important for this shot. Some additional depth of field would help you bring that area into sharper focus.
Keep up the good work :)
John Setzler
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11/07/2004 05:34:12 AM |
ahh - st thomas
bolongo bay.
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11/05/2004 09:36:47 AM |
| nice close-up and i even drink this brand |
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11/04/2004 05:14:52 PM |
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11/02/2004 02:57:58 AM |
| I am a HUGE fan of shallow DOF but in this case not having the text at the bottom of the bottle lable hurts it IMO. |
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11/01/2004 11:59:28 AM |
| Like the colors but would have liked it more with some more of the bottle in focus I guess |
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