Final Instructions
by jpb56ny

Comment by wetland:
Great response to the challenge...may be cropped a bit too much at bottom but really like this one!

Final Instructions
by jpb56ny

Comment by KevinRiggs:
I like this from a photojournalistic angle but some of the whites in the lower righthand third appear to be very hot. The rest of the image looks to have solid color saturation and good depth (nice separation in the hair color of the individuals to the left of the green jacket). Not sure much could have been done to limit the severity of the white areas.

Final Instructions
by jpb56ny

Comment by adine:
A dramatic moment - I crop down from the left - come in closer to tha man who is giving instructions and loose the folks without fur coats. crop in a bit from the right to give the feeling that there are perhaps moe people lidtenning to him hiding the fact that the gray coated woman is the last one there.

Final Instructions
by jpb56ny

Comment by erin_m02:
Would have liked to have seen an active shot (them actually protesting).

Final Instructions
by jpb56ny

Comment by crabappl3:
Either you didn't want to be a photojournalist, or you weren't comfortable approaching them, but I'm sure you could have gotten some of them to pose for their cause. 5 -danny

Final Instructions
by jpb56ny

Comment by mirdonamy:
Message clear, photo needs better composition

Final Instructions
by jpb56ny

Comment by astr0wiz:
I see the hint of a message, but I also see a bland composition.

Suspended in Time
by jpb56ny

Comment by amsmyth:
this image really takes time but it's worth it...it's busy but the central subject is well portrayed - good light, clarity, sense of impairment 7

Suspended in Time
by jpb56ny

Comment by BeingClever:
Given that the man appears to be homeless and he's eating something in a paper bag beside brightly coloured signs about eating and drinking, you definitely would have had a more powerful image had you captured the subjects face. I realize that street shots are tricky though and who knows if this was an option. Kudos for skipping the staged shot and taking the more unpredictable route.

New YorK
by jpb56ny

Comment by Leigh:
Very nice! Love the reflection off the water.I could see this as an actual cover shot!