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09/07/2004 09:26:18 AM |
Hi from the Critique Club!
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The comments below have already mentioned this image's less than perfect attributes - the focus mainly, but this is actually not an unpleasant photograph. There's a wistful quality to it and the lenticular blurs from the spots of wax would have been lost if this were sharp.
Personally, I prefer it this way - it has more sugggestion of inner thought than if it were pin-sharp, and its warm glow is easy on the eye as if one is daydreaming.
That said, cramming a shot just in time for a challenge is not good practice to win challenges if that is your target! My advice would be don't submit a shot unless you're happy with it - as it stays in your profile page and you may grow to hate it - until you score better with other shots!
Cheers
Jon |
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08/31/2004 07:23:23 PM |
| Good thought, but it's all blurry. Try pre-focusing in a well-lit room, then turn the lights off. |
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08/31/2004 06:19:59 PM |
| I'm not sure what you were going for here. The candle doesn't say HOPE to me. Some pointers. Its quite a bit out of focus. Maybe you meant it to be but it doesn't work for me. A better composition would be to have it off center. Good luck on future entries. |
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08/31/2004 03:26:43 PM |
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08/30/2004 07:31:08 AM |
| Photo was a little fuzzy. |
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08/29/2004 10:09:52 AM |
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08/29/2004 04:43:22 AM |
| Couple of things with this photo, firstly how does a candle display hope? I can't see it here! Secondly it is quite badly out of focus making it quite unattractive. |
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08/28/2004 04:15:00 PM |
| The soft focus is nice, though I would have liked to see the flame itself in focus. |
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08/27/2004 11:36:54 AM |
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08/27/2004 11:23:13 AM |
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08/26/2004 12:28:11 PM |
| The whole picture is blurry. Maybe that is what you were going for but IMO it would have made the photo better if the flame at least had been crisp. |
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08/25/2004 05:36:32 PM |
| I don't know if this was meant to be blurry, but I'm not sure it works. |
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08/25/2004 01:41:29 PM |
| Is strange to me to saw this image, very blured. If you try to get a soft focus image, can be you may use a piece of plastic or a filter to do so. |
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08/25/2004 01:18:04 PM |
| This needs to be much more sharply focused to resonate with me. Withut that, I can't see the tie in to the theme, "hope." |
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08/25/2004 07:35:17 AM |
| a hope candle? not sure i get what going in here. |
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08/25/2004 06:52:50 AM |
| I'm sure you will have other comments about the focus ... I'd really like to see more of it in this shot. Composition is good and the exposure level looks fine - I think it just needs something for the eye to latch onto. |
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08/24/2004 11:36:12 PM |
| Good idea, unfortunately out of focus. |
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08/24/2004 10:17:24 PM |
It would've been nice to at least have the picture in-focus.
As for the theme, I don't understand the logic beind it... |
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08/24/2004 09:30:11 PM |
| umm... hey... don't mind me but... FOCUS!!!! |
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08/24/2004 09:27:03 PM |
| This needs better focus... |
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