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08/31/2004 05:21:46 PM |
Too cluttered - and the fish looks sick. |
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08/31/2004 10:59:48 AM |
Nice set up, background and foreground are however a bit too messy |
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08/31/2004 09:22:25 AM |
It's an interesting image albeit a bit cluttered. Hope? Fish? |
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08/30/2004 09:16:59 AM |
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08/29/2004 12:45:57 PM |
This is a really "busy" image - with not a lot to say for "Hope". And that which might indicate "hope" is conflicting: Maybe the fish is "Hoping" for a meal, but "Silica Gel; Do Not Eat"? And maybe a student somewhere is "Hoping" for a good test result, but I "Hope" you don't mean the fish is. :-) Yep, there is a Unicorn in the background, too. But, paper clips? A piece of pipe fitting? The edge of a paper towel? A drum stick? What IS all that stuff ... ? I HOPE you got it cleaned up since then. :-) |
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08/28/2004 06:22:34 PM |
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08/27/2004 10:11:20 AM |
To busy and poor lighting on the fish. |
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08/26/2004 06:18:42 PM |
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08/26/2004 12:25:33 PM |
I think there is too much "stuff" in the photo. It distracts from the main subject. |
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08/26/2004 07:34:19 AM |
nice idea but the photo is too busy for me. |
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08/26/2004 07:05:51 AM |
Way too busy, even if it's intended to look as if the owner has too much other stuff going on in his/her life. |
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08/25/2004 05:32:33 PM |
A bit busy is my opinion. |
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08/25/2004 11:31:14 AM |
Remove bowl and food and place it in a cleaner backgroud with no clutter and you're disco. |
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08/25/2004 10:54:53 AM |
Good idea, but IMO poorly executed. There is a lot in the photo that doesn't relate to your main idea (book, receipts, drumstick(?), spring, and other background elements). Focus on the fish is a little off, maybe due to glass which you might not be able to help. Composition could be a bit stronger (see threads on rule of thirds). Reflection of the light in the upper right of the bowl distracts. And a bit of work with levels would help, i think. Sorry to seem negative, but if you can go back and reshoot it keeping the above in mind, I think it will seem better to you. |
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08/25/2004 10:31:14 AM |
Though the clutter gives the picture context, it's also pretty distracting. |
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08/25/2004 07:37:22 AM |
too many random things in the picture |
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08/24/2004 11:55:53 PM |
There is much too much 'trash' on this picture. it;s too crowdy and you loose the fish food in that mess. |
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08/24/2004 09:33:28 PM |
Wonderful photograph. Would have been great to have had the fish looking more towards the food itself. |
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08/24/2004 09:24:27 PM |
A less cluttered background/foreground would improve this... |
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08/24/2004 08:07:45 PM |
Having raised bettas, I know this scene well....too bad the clutter around the bowl is a bit distracting. I did enjoy the shot! |
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