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Lips
Lips
mzappone


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Challenge: Defining Feature II (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Nikon D60
Lens: Nikon NIKKOR AF-S DX VR 55-200 f4-5.6 G IF-ED
Location: my house
Date: Nov 22, 2011
Aperture: 5.6
ISO: 800
Shutter: 1/50
Galleries: Black and White
Date Uploaded: Nov 22, 2011

I have not edited this picture in anyway, but I think that this a very strong image. This picture I believe has a very retro feel to it like the old Twiggy pictures. With this being my friend the way that I remember her is for her big lips.
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You must retain your original, unedited file (exactly as recorded by your camera), and provide it to the Site Council along with a list of your editing steps within 48 hours of any validation request. Files that have been saved or altered with any editing or transfer software are NOT originals.

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 Comments Made During the Challenge
11/28/2011 01:27:51 AM
Very sweet, I like the mood you've captured.
11/27/2011 11:46:10 PM
maybe to recompose the image, play with the light to make the lips stand out.
11/25/2011 09:43:31 PM
I feel more light and emphisis should be on these sensual lips. Dreamy feel to this.
11/25/2011 03:15:45 PM
The shadows seem to take the focus away from the lips and to the eyes, also not too keen on the big dark area below her chin.
11/25/2011 11:30:55 AM
YES, really nice. I wonder why you have choosen black and white and upper light. I also wonder why you have included complete face on the photo. Because when I look to it, the lips are beautiful, but also, the eyes, nose,... So I think the photo doesn't take the attention to the lips (unless you read the title of course). Anyway I think it is a great photo
11/23/2011 09:35:21 AM
This is a little soft but it kinda suits the image. That area of jet blackness under her chin totally pulls my eye in away from her face though, might have been better to include a light source aimed upwards, or to just have placed her in stronger light so we could see some detail down there.
11/23/2011 07:16:54 AM
Too soft for me, but a great shot.
11/23/2011 04:46:36 AM
Nice shot, could be a lot stronger if she was right in the middle of the frame.
11/23/2011 01:53:13 AM
It might be me, but it looks really soft to me. If it's sharp SOOC you might have issues when downsizing... unsharp mask works wonders before AND after downsizing. Just a thought.

Lovely photo. A bit too tight cropped for me, though.


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