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08/30/2011 12:04:41 PM |
| Title fits the image perfectly. Just one small detail - to me that is: I wished that all the pencils were turned in the same way: not showing the label on it. This would made it complete. |
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08/30/2011 03:58:33 AM |
| My eyes are instantly drawn to the text on the pencils in this photo. I think if each pencil were rotated so that we couldn't see the text that this could be been more powerful. |
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08/29/2011 07:39:04 PM |
CLEVER CLEVER CLEVER.....
The focus is good the colors excellent. The sharpener does look so well as a zipp - very clever indeed.....
Suggestion - If all the pencils were arranged so one did not see the brands it would have made this image pop. The upsidedown text on the pencils distracts from the image... Something to think about if doing anything like this again, but that just my opinion, and I still like this idea as it is well excuted, and made me very happy, when I first saw it, and still does.....
 PLEASING
THANK YOU for entering this very COLORFUL image
from shez with love xox |
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08/29/2011 07:16:14 AM |
| That's really clever. At first I wondered why the sharpened was there, but is only took a moment to recognize the zipper. Carefully constructed and colorful -- two important elements of Sherpet's style. |
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08/28/2011 07:59:28 AM |
| Cool, someone who took the pencil idea. My friend had the idea to do something with pencils aswell, but didn't manage to get the right shot, so she didn't enter. I think you did a good job, but could've done better on some points. |
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08/28/2011 04:29:23 AM |
| How clever!!!!!! I love this concept! |
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08/25/2011 02:49:12 PM |
| i like how this was done! good color and composition! 9 |
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08/24/2011 06:01:13 PM |
| Nice idea. Very sharp and saturated. It would be more effective having all the writings hidden down. |
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08/24/2011 10:48:29 AM |
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08/24/2011 04:31:10 AM |
I've done a similar shot like this and so have many others. Not knocking you for that though!
Would have been better if you turned the pencils so we couldn't see the writing on any of them. Right now it looks like a rushed job.
A square crop would also be more like a Sherpet shot. |
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08/24/2011 02:14:54 AM |
| I like the idea, although I didn't immediately notice it - a narrow portrait crop would make it possibly a ribbon winner for me (and the pencil sharperner/zipper pull also in focus). |
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08/24/2011 02:01:34 AM |
| Nice colours. Maybe it would be better if all the pencils didn't have the writing showing. |
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