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Can't see the forest for the trees
Can't see the forest for the trees
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Challenge: Vanishing Point (Basic Editing I)
Camera: HP PhotoSmart 320
Location: Barrie,Ontario
Date: Aug 7, 2004
Aperture: 4.5
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/60
Galleries: Landscape
Date Uploaded: Aug 9, 2004

First submission,any and all critiques will be helpful. Trying to catch the "bug" again after 25 years of not having a camera in my hand. I did'nt want to send a photo of train tracks or a road, as I imagine there will be plenty of those.

Statistics
Place: 237 out of 245
Avg (all users): 3.7866
Avg (commenters): 3.0571
Avg (participants): 3.5504
Avg (non-participants): 3.9514
Views since voting: 804
Views during voting: 439
Votes: 314
Comments: 38
Favorites: 0


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08/18/2004 05:18:27 AM
There was a lot of potential in this pic Chip....if it hadn`t been so out of focus, you would have finished much higher.
Don`t be downheartened..just keep the same level of originality and make sure you get the focus right for future shots.

Gordon
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
08/17/2004 07:40:27 PM
too out of focus
08/17/2004 01:39:41 PM
lacks in colours, focus...
08/17/2004 01:26:06 PM
extremely ou of focus.
08/17/2004 12:57:19 PM
to pixelated
08/17/2004 09:41:08 AM
Not in focus.
08/17/2004 08:28:22 AM
Too blury, maybe a different angle could be used.
But it meets the challenge very well!
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08/16/2004 08:17:20 PM
OUT OF FOCUS!
08/16/2004 12:01:32 PM
So bad it isn't in proper focus I think since the thumbnail was very good.
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08/16/2004 07:09:55 AM
This seems very fuzzy and dark in the interior. It's a cool perspective, though.
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08/15/2004 07:26:24 PM
Very noisy. Needs some focus. Good try.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
08/13/2004 07:42:11 PM
This picture just looked a bit too blurry and bright. I gave it a 3.
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08/13/2004 02:05:01 PM
good picture, great combination
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08/13/2004 09:55:00 AM
It seems to me that something ought to be in focus here...
08/13/2004 09:25:16 AM
What the heck men! It's nothing at all in focus here.
08/12/2004 01:13:15 PM
Me guessing a camera phone.
08/12/2004 09:03:53 AM
Very OOF!
08/12/2004 08:35:02 AM
blurred, a bit
08/12/2004 07:53:46 AM
Really like the trees, but needed to see better DOF
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08/12/2004 05:27:44 AM
If only you had gotten this in focus! It's such a neat shot.
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08/12/2004 02:28:36 AM
I like the use of tall trees to show a vanishing point, as it forces the eye into the picture. The colors and textures would be great (I think) if they were in sharp focus - unfortunately they are not.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
08/12/2004 01:06:12 AM
I like this composition but ... it looks a little out of focus ...
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08/11/2004 06:44:06 PM
this is such a great composition! it's a shame it didn't turn out better
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08/11/2004 04:10:31 PM
Such a shame that this photo is so poorly focused. I really liked the thumbnail and was excited to look at the full image. Contrast is also off and the right side and bottom could be cropped a bit more.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
08/11/2004 03:38:15 PM
This picture is fuzzy and I'm not really seeing a vanishing point.
08/11/2004 03:23:37 PM
Follows the theme, but the photo lacks sharpness.
08/11/2004 12:23:19 PM
where is this
08/11/2004 12:20:47 PM
I'm sure you have plenty of comments which mention the focus, so I won't dwell on it
08/11/2004 11:23:22 AM
Nice picture, but I think is out of focus
08/11/2004 10:55:21 AM
It's a little too blurry.
08/11/2004 08:18:39 AM
Good concept and composition. Unfortunately the bad focus really hurts.
08/11/2004 06:16:00 AM
The subject is an original and interesting choice for the challenge. However, the photo is out of focus and grainy.
08/11/2004 05:36:37 AM
nice idea cand composition...but why is it so fuzzy?
08/11/2004 05:35:27 AM
Good idea but picture is out of focus.
08/11/2004 02:11:02 AM
what did u take this on???
08/10/2004 08:35:10 PM
A bit too blurry for my tastes.
08/10/2004 08:31:42 PM
This needs better focus...
08/10/2004 08:15:07 PM
I can't really tell what is in focus here.


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