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12/17/2002 04:01:46 AM |
Critique club
Hi there Brenna,
Well, I am sure you gathered from the comments that this was a bit small and people couldn't make out what you were photographing. The composition is a bit too clustered, so the main point isn't obvious. It is hard to see that there is a flag here, partly to do with the motion but also the angle isn't great. If you had taken a picture of it from the front and used a slightly faster shutter speed, cropping out the background to focus on the subject and get rid of the bright light, I think it would have done much better. Good Luck in the future. |
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12/15/2002 11:48:04 AM |
| Perhaps... a bit hard to see. |
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12/14/2002 06:38:08 PM |
1)Does the photo fit the challenge?(4)
2)Color(4)
3)Composition(3)
4)Focus(2)
5)Background(3)
6)Lighting(3)
7)Title(4)
Overall Score:3.24 rounded to 3
Commentary:
Sorry about this. I Realize it is a flag, but that is all I realize. This is not a print I would hang in my living room. That is basically my grading system. Would I hang this in my house on the wall for all to see. Something that is going to represent a 3D world in a 2D photo. |
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12/13/2002 12:56:22 AM |
| Way too small, its more of a thumbnail than a photo. |
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12/12/2002 07:25:50 AM |
| I can't really make out what this is, and the small dimensions don't help. :-( 2 |
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12/11/2002 05:49:28 PM |
| Too small, and I can't tell what it is!! |
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12/11/2002 03:33:20 PM |
| I'm not sure what I'm looking for here. I s that a book? |
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12/11/2002 02:19:13 PM |
| It's difficult to just this picture when it's so small. This size should only be used for pictures with much less detail (in my opinion anyway). |
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12/10/2002 09:29:41 AM |
| Pic is too small. I see the motion, and you have the stationary reference point, but the size makes it hard to see. |
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12/09/2002 09:01:45 PM |
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12/09/2002 06:50:48 PM |
| too small... I can't tell what's in this shot... |
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12/09/2002 05:07:11 PM |
| Too blurred to have any impact....Cub |
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12/09/2002 07:36:13 AM |
| So much out of focus to me. I'm guessing there is a flag in there. The hot spot in the corner is distracting. |
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12/09/2002 07:05:17 AM |
| I do not know what this is, or is supposed to be. Plus, the size is a little bit small. jgillard2 |
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12/09/2002 04:03:20 AM |
| its hard to discern what the subject is |
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12/09/2002 02:10:08 AM |
| Whilst it clearly depicts motion, the problem is that to the casual observer (ie: me), it's impossible to tell what's actually been captured. |
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12/08/2002 08:09:31 PM |
| too small... i can't really see what i'm supposed to see here maybe... - setzler |
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